He Didn't Mean Anything

He Didn't Mean Anything

A Poem by Aly

This is the the time where I usually know.

This time is different. 
You barely mean something to me.
It's been two months.
We talk everyday.
But it hasn't changed anything.

On the outside I care.
On the outside I don't.

Even now I thought I was possibly falling for you.
That I might have feelings.
That day you were I didn't feel anything. 

I wasn't attached.
I wanted to feel something but I didn't. 

Now you know how I feel

© 2013 Aly



Author's Note

Aly
I listened to the song "Tiny Vessels by Death Cab for Cutie" and well this is also how I feel about someone who I wanted to fall for. But didn't

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Very well expressed emotions of the formative part of a relationship

Posted 4 Years Ago


Aly

4 Years Ago

thank you
A memorable write and you are not wrong
A heart wants to sing but cries a sad sweet song
I know how you feel my girl as we walk along

Posted 4 Years Ago


Aly

4 Years Ago

thank you
poetry-kiddo alienbaba

4 Years Ago

yes thanks again
Very nice, it expresses a lot. Well done! :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Aly

4 Years Ago

thank you :)
Love isn't something you can force... There will be many people in life that seem to be the one on the outside, but on the inside are nothing more then men who just didn't have that x-factor. I thought the poem was great and love how you could relate to it. Thank you for sharing, yours truely Danielle

Posted 4 Years Ago


Aly

4 Years Ago

:) thanks glad you liked it. Please read "Four Words"
Powerful words!

Posted 4 Years Ago


We've all felt similar but never been able to express it so well, thanks Aly this was great.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Aly

4 Years Ago

thank you :)
Wonderful! I have definitely felt this way before:)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Aly

4 Years Ago

thank you :) glad you enjoyed
i love this poem! and i love the fact that its inspired by music lol keep up the great work, aly :D :D :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


Aly

4 Years Ago

thank you :) Most of my Poems are inspired by music.
I agree with quinfinn that we cannot make ourselves fall for someone and it happens without reasons and planning. Your poem brought this out very well and more.
Thank you for sharing it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Aly

4 Years Ago

thank you :) glad you enjoyed.
DIVYA

4 Years Ago

welcome.
i like the directness and the brutal efficiency of this honest piece of prose. i am not familiar with the song you mention in your note but i am sure it is a real kicker. i don't understand how you "want" to fall for someone...it just happens or doesn't in my experience. maybe it's a generational thingy. i am in my 50's.....anyway, very, very good write.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Aly

4 Years Ago

Thank you. Because when someone likes you, I dunno but in my experience you can't help but like them.. read more
Aly

4 Years Ago

I wanted to like him. Want to like him. but I don't.
quinfinn

4 Years Ago

oh, okay, that i do get.....thank you for clarifying that for me.

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