JULIET''S GHOST

poem

thy story book involved suckles skin

climaxes Capulet presence

in thicken plots

self sacrificing poison, vanity

dagger lipped   

 then, hallow breath raids

 a stabbing of air entering,

exiting concluding lungs

distinguishing  

between the identity  

of death and love..    

 

Reviews

[Autumn]

I must say this piece is stunning! Shakespear would love it. Great form, i like the choice of words. Very original

[Emily Burns]

the Bard would love this

[Joshua Randall]

Interesting piece. Short and straight to the point. Cheers

[Rusty]

A great treatment of the defining love tale that is as poigniant today as when crafted. In esscense a subtle but strong summary.

[MOON]

Shakespearen , excellent write .

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlande..]

this is pretty damn powerful
it has that old school grace
"distinguishing between the identity of death and love.."
is a great ending
you've summed up the feel of the original piece and
your own feelings in a few short, effective metaphors
very nice