Dem Pants

Gangsta Style

See dem pants hangin down

Be look'in the part of the gangsta in town

Don't be doin no crime

Or you'll end up doin time

Cause you can't run in dem pants

Author's Note

Ok it's not political correct and I expect the grammar sucks, but I had fun and laughed as I wrote.

Reviews

[marcus]

haha, I like this one!!!!

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Marcus. Appreciate your stopping by and commenting.

[Samuel Dickens]

Heh-heh, you're quite right--it wouldn't be any different than trying to run with your shoelaces tied together. Dis made me snicker.

[Willard Wells]

I see this so often and even with a belt as they walk along they have to hold them up. Personally I have better things to do with my time than to spend it wastefully just holding up my pants. Nothing like good cheap entertainment. Thanks for the kind review Samuel.

[Debra White]

Hi :)
Don't care if your poem isn't politically correct, it made me laugh and your words are true - Running in saggy pants is like trying to run in stilettos - damn near impossible!
Thanks for the smiles :)
Kindest regards, Debra

[Willard Wells]

Thank you for the kind words and I could not ask for more from my work than to make you laugh and bring a smile to your face. Greatly appreciated. Love the stilettos comment.

[Debra White]

You're welcome :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

but the sound and tone are true...as is the wisdom...can't run in dez pants...cause they're hangin' down too far...and all kinds of folks is wearing them, really.
you capture a reality here. and do it well.

[Willard Wells]

And it seems to be gaining momentum. Thank you for reviewing my work. It is greatly appreciated.

[Marie]

The grammar's perfect, for what this represents. And I think it's funny; I don't care whether it's politically correct or not.

[Willard Wells]

You know Marie I don't care if it's correct or not either. Thank you for reviewing my work and I could not ask for more than a smile from you.

[SyberRose]

This is cute...and so true...they need some suspenders...nicely done...Rose:)

[Willard Wells]

Thank you Rose. I am glad you enjoyed my play time. Greatly appreciate your reading and commenting on my work.

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A well written piece based on a well observed phenomenon Willard. A piece to cheer the day indeed!

[Willard Wells]

Thanks John for commenting and I am glad it was enjoyed.

[AaronFreitas]

haha loved it buddy! I got a good laugh at it too :)

[Willard Wells]

Good Aaron, I could not ask for more than to bring a smile to your face. Thanks for visiting

[JayceeC]

LMAO...I want to make this into a poster for my classroom wall. This is perfect it even has a rap feel to it. I get so tired of looking at boxers that I now buy hot pink ribbon for them to use in their beltloops.

[Willard Wells]

go for it. I love it. I am glad I brought some smiles to your face this evening. My work here is done. Thank you so much for reading and commenting. Me giving something a RAP feel. Not that's funny.................and scary.

[JayceeC]

Awww and I thought you wanted to be the next Eminem...lol

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this is hilarious... nothing incorrect about it... this phenomena has spread all over the globe and you have written what I've always thought to myself when I see this... love it, Willard... thanks for sharing!

[Willard Wells]

I have talked about it with many people over the years and something triggered in my head tonight and there you have it. Thanks for reading and commenting. You have to write some fun stuff now and then.

[....................]

yes... if not you go completely crazy!!!!

[Willard Wells]

I may have waited too long.

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that's funny :)