Today

Today, the day I'll never forget

the day that scars me forever

the day that my heart is torn apart

the day that left me bleeding

 

The only words I wanna hear

words of silence

the sound of nothing 

engraved in my soul

 

Cold and Empty

I collapse

Goodbye

I hate goodbyes...

 

Today...

The day my life died

This day...

The day you left me...

 

Reviews

[Veronica Franco]

That is absolutely beautiful. I love it.

[Kitty]

I got gooseflesh when I read this. Your writing appeals to me on a very deep level because it is very much how I feel about someone!

This is a fantastic write!!!!

Josie

[Little Amy Lee]

i love this
especially the ending

[Lyrical Love]

Great job. I like the flow.
The voice of the lyrics is good also.
~lyrical