Make Me Real

Midnight sky delights

The seductive silence

The call of the dark

Thrill me

Amaze me

Captivate me...

 

Fallen stars

Lost loves each one of them...

I'm just an observer

Just an outsider

I never found love

and I never will...

 

People walking past me

Oh if I could just see into their souls...

Provoke the thought

Challenge the stars

Erase the scripts... 

 

Blindfold me

Tie me up

Make me sink in your thoughts

Let me be a part of this magnificent beauty

Taste your immortality

Be gone like the ashes in the wind

Make me feel

Make me real

Just for a moment...

 

 

Reviews

[Dani California]

"Make me sink in your thoughts
Let me be a part of this magnificent beauty
Taste your immortality
Be gone like the ashes in the wind"


I really like these lines... connection...
for a moment ....
'Make me sink into your thoughts'... wow.

I enjoyed reading this.. its content and
it has a great flow. Nice...

Great work!

[Strife]

Very nice. It's like the narrator wants to make sure she's alive