If I Wrote You A Poem

If i wrote you a poem, would you read it's words,
Words that manifested and stemmed from my heart?
Would you read from the beginning to the end,
Or would you read from the end to the start?

Would you obsess over every letter,
that i gently crafted with these hands?
Would you blush after every adjective,
or will you ignore all that I am?

Would you cherish the epitome of my heart,
Even if it was in the shape of a rhyme?
Would you describe my feelings as infinite
Even if it distorts the truth of time?

If I told you I never wrote a poem for a lover,
Would you think me as absurd?
Truth is, to you my poems are worthless,
because you'll never read my words.
 

Reviews

[MandaBear]

very nice poem

[qaralynn]

love it..great write

[Lilly]

amazing! i love this
I haven't read much of your work but from what I have read, I think you have a great talent,

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i love this

[Str8jacket]

Aww I wrote a poem like this, but it looks like s**t next to yours. I know how you feel dude. Your words are so eloquent and beautiful, so I wouldn't doubt the person who you wrote a poem for wouldn't treasure it. This is beautiful :)

[Cherryblossom]

Beautiful. If this said me doesn't read this, they are truly at lost. This was very heart felt, so touching. Great write!
~Karla

[Sean Allen]

Some poetry is not meant to be read, it is just your own self expression.
If you wrote your intended a poem and they never read it, would it be worth the effort?
I think so!

[bluessadmood]

Oh that was so nice and lovely ,in the name of love we will do whatever..if only he will understand
If i wrote you a poem would you read my words,those came right from the heart
Will you be obsessed with each letter,I gently made just for you with my hands
Would you blush reading it ,or will you just ignore whatever I wrote
Would you cherish my heart,I made it so it rhymes
If you knew how my feelings are so infinite
they dont understand any meaning of time
If i told you I never wrote a love poem before
you ll think me absurd and silly
I know my poems are worthless
for my words you ll never read..I just know
That was so great,I really enjoyed this ..what lovely feelings were put into this
lovely write..

[WriterMe]

Wow, that was excellent. Very heartfelt =] Touching too. If you wrote 'me' a poem I'd read it without a doubt. Great job.