Cinquains :)

Cinquains :)

A Poem by Luna Evangeline

RAINBOW

Dazzling display

Glowing, ascending, hypnotizing

Vibrant as the sun

CRESCENT

 

 

GHOST

Spirit astray

Sighing, mourning, lingering

Elusive as a forgotten memory

POLTERGEIST

 

 

SUMMER

Sweltering oasis

Baking, relaxing, tanning

Slow as molasses

FREEDOM

 

 

FEATHER

Green, silken

Dipping, diving, dancing

Drifts like a lonesome cloud

FRINGE

 

 


© 2013 Luna Evangeline



Author's Note

Luna Evangeline
I know perhaps these don't follow the traditional cinquain rules but they're fun to write. Enjoy :)

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Haha, and it was fun to read as well. Cutely short cinquians that provide imagery to the reader in a concise fashion. Much enjoyed. :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Luna Evangeline

4 Years Ago

Thank you. :)
Nice poem! The symbolism is excellent, I really enjoyed it!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Luna Evangeline

4 Years Ago

Thanks love :)
Regardless of the faithfulness toward the traditional form, this is masterfully-crafted...I just love how it flows, the imagery is perfect, and I think it would work great as a spoken piece...great piece :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


Luna Evangeline

4 Years Ago

Thanks lovee. :)
kublakhan27

4 Years Ago

You're very welcome :)
Amazing how the images strike in the readers mind asoon as he hits the 5th line he/she's shot with the next stanza that just wow's him/her as the last stanza did.. The portrayal of such sublime forms of nature and wonder.. summed up in one poem. Liked it a lot.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Luna Evangeline

4 Years Ago

Thank you .:)
A beautiful description of the clouds. Each set of lines adding to the strength and the desire of the poem. You did well with the cinquain. Create a amazing poem.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


Luna Evangeline

4 Years Ago

Thank you :)

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