Your Name.

Your Name.

A Poem by .SaveSydney!.

This one is very short; I might extend and edit it sometime in the future. :) dedicated to Philip, of couse. <3


To hear it;

Makes my senses come alive.

Gives me butterflies.

Makes my heart race,

And cheeks flush..

Just the sound of your name,

Philip. <3



© 2010 .SaveSydney!.

Author's Note

I know this is probably my shortest; but review please! :)

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Lovely and simple. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

I like it's brevity.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Very sweet!

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Nothing as talented as a writer who can write a short poem with meaning. The poem was strong. Told a very good story. Some people in our life can make us crazy by their memory and hearing their name. A very good poem.

Posted 7 Years Ago

Heh-heh, I have similar feelings in that poem with innocent crushes I have. I like the fact you actually put his name at the end instead of us having to question who it is. Bravo! Excellent write. And it may be short, but it is surely sweet!

Posted 7 Years Ago

sweet~ lovely expression from heart~

Posted 7 Years Ago

Cute for how short it is. Nice job!

Posted 7 Years Ago

Haha wow...girls and boys...anyways good poem. I like it. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago

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Added on July 28, 2010
Last Updated on July 28, 2010



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