Your Name.

Your Name.

A Poem by .SaveSydney!.
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This one is very short; I might extend and edit it sometime in the future. :) dedicated to Philip, of couse. <3

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To hear it;

Makes my senses come alive.

Gives me butterflies.

Makes my heart race,

And cheeks flush..

Just the sound of your name,

Philip. <3

 

 


© 2010 .SaveSydney!.



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.SaveSydney!.
I know this is probably my shortest; but review please! :)

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Lovely and simple. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like it's brevity.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Very sweet!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nothing as talented as a writer who can write a short poem with meaning. The poem was strong. Told a very good story. Some people in our life can make us crazy by their memory and hearing their name. A very good poem.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Heh-heh, I have similar feelings in that poem with innocent crushes I have. I like the fact you actually put his name at the end instead of us having to question who it is. Bravo! Excellent write. And it may be short, but it is surely sweet!
:D


Posted 7 Years Ago


sweet~ lovely expression from heart~

Posted 7 Years Ago


Cute for how short it is. Nice job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Haha wow...girls and boys...anyways good poem. I like it. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Hai; the name's Sydney. But i'm sure you figured that much out already. Hah; i don't consider myself an epic writer, it's just something i do a lot. I'm very music oriented, mostly techcore, crunk.. more..

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