and now

and now

A Poem by XO Nonie

And now I sit staring at the wall
Of the university wondering
What I did to deserve such hate
What I did to deserve such pain
Why can't I have one situation in life
That brings me endless joy 
That holds me down the way you once did
And now I wonder what she has that I don't
What characteristics does she have that I don't
What does she do to make you happy 
To make you smile
And now I just want to know 

© 2016 XO Nonie



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Thank you for sharing this is so heart felt. The lie is told and for some reason we follow it. This lie that when someone we have dedicated everything to makes a decision. A decision that changes our lives. We look into ourselves, to see what we did wrong. When in fact the lie is that it is not us at all. This is all about their wrongs, there is nothing wrong with us at all.

Posted 10 Months Ago


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Thank you for sharing this is so heart felt. The lie is told and for some reason we follow it. This lie that when someone we have dedicated everything to makes a decision. A decision that changes our lives. We look into ourselves, to see what we did wrong. When in fact the lie is that it is not us at all. This is all about their wrongs, there is nothing wrong with us at all.

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I understand your painful feelings my frnd, I know how tremendous the pain in situations like this... But remember when someone rejects you, it's not you who made mistake, it's always that other person's perspective, so cheer up and know that you have a worth and you deserve far better than such rejection of a person who doesn't seem to look at your real beauty...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 11 Months Ago


i hate when you want to know those kind of things. i can really relate to this poem.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Growing up one faces this more than once until they meet the one God has in store for you. Your first choice must have not been what God wanted for you. Keep looking. Valentine

Posted 11 Months Ago


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Thanks for sharing this. It is an amazing work and I could understand your feeling of despair. Since, this is something I could relate with, I better wish you not to force yourself finding out the reason for his smile with another woman. Rather you should focus on your own betterment and time will heal your wounds as well if required, it will answer you.
Until then, be positive, hopeful for a better day!

-Anjali

Posted 11 Months Ago


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A painful transition through life to wish to know...poignantly articulated :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


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...so simple.... but so true how many times do we all sit on that wall wondering why.... makes you think of your own situation .

Posted 11 Months Ago


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Nony, you can be the ripest, juiciest, sweetest little peach in the whole damn world, and some people just don't like peaches.

Posted 11 Months Ago


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XO Nonie

11 Months Ago

AMEN to that ! Well said my fellow writer.
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Such thoughts are natural when we see that others are easily able to accomplish what we could not..
I see these kind of feelings and expressions in your writes which are very natural and common happening in people's lives. In that way your writes are very relatable all.
I always feel connected to your writes.
This write shows pain of a person who loses the love of a person she loves.
This write is touching...
Thanks for sharing..t

Posted 11 Months Ago


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