A Bird

The best thing ever.

Six years.

I'm not even twenty-five.

I don't know if I'm alive.

Something happened.

Oh something happened.

It's still happening

And I can't deal.

You're a bird.

A dream at least.

You're A BIRD.

A dream at least.

My words were full,

yes they were.

I meant it all.

and so much more.

But this is just history

of you and me

and what it means

it's everything. (you were everything)

You're a bird.

A dream at least.

Pure sun,

And I can't forget.

Trust me I've tried.

Trust me I've cried.

You know it's true, 

this one's all you.

AND ONLY YOU.

Cuz I'm not through.

I'm not through with you.

You're a bird

A Dream at least.

Pure sun.

My Abird.

A dream at least 

Pure Sun

Author's Note

Rum...
That's why I'm doing this.
I had rum for dinner.

Reviews

[Adrian Elise]

dear god
make me a bird
so I can fly far
far far away from here.

I will turn 31 years old this year. I hope life is always kind to you. You are deserving OEJ

[Riversdale McBoggis]

the 17th is a happy holiday for me.
adrianaddict4lyfe
love, oej

[The Chosen]

I liked how it was written. And the repeating bird part. Pretty cool.

[Riversdale McBoggis]

Thank you!

[LadyRosaline]

Reminds me of Gin Blossom Lyrics (a 90's band ..Hey Jealousy, Follow you down, Found out about you)
your not 25 so maybe you know them.

Bird and dream..word play?
as we all know a bird migrates so it will come bac..as a certain dream repeats itself?
Great you use punctuation! I praise you for that!
Watch out for words you would text message with.."Cuz"

I am sorry for your sadness MR. Jack Sparrow but save some of the Rum..you may need it when your hurting again..

Catch yourself saying
"But why is all of the rum gone?"

bumme..it hurts.keep writing it will heal a hurting heart..

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Sarah_Leanne/1153228/

[Riversdale McBoggis]

Thank you for reading!
Wordplay indeed.
The hook is just a name I miss.
I'm more comfortable singing her name this way.
These words just feel good.
I appreciate your thoughts on my little tune.
Thank you for the laugh as well as the uplifting words, miss lady. I needed it.

[LadyRosaline]

Anytime send me a pm

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I really like the flow you created with this piece, it falls into a very nice rhythm.

I also like how you took a subject matter and managed to make it unique and original. at the same time.

[Riversdale McBoggis]

Thank you for your thoughts!