Visiting My Love

I still remember

Miss lovely lady

You, in your evening dress 

My hands a little shaky

 

Love, was the night we met

One dance was all i asked

Day turned to night but

We didn't want to move to fast

 

Can a night be ever better

Hold my breath as your

Hands grasped mine

Again we stepped onto the floor

 

And danced a dance of love

Our eyes never left each other's

Lips touched with passion

May i have another?

 

Taste of wine upon them

Each kiss just moments apart

Other's just smiled upon us as we

RIP lonliness from our hearts 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

As a widow, this touched me deeply and is very beautiful. I love the form you used. Is their a technical name for it?

[Richard Morimanno]

i am truley sorry for your loss Neva Flores.

thank you for your review, as for the form.. i do not believe so.

[Richard Morimanno]

i searched for a Technical name for this form with no luck

[Janice Fronek(red.panda..]

this beautiful :D

[Richard Morimanno]

thank you very much =)

[Janice Fronek(red.panda)]

your welcome

[The Dreamer]

wonderful - loved the format. a poem that is hiding in another poem.

[Richard Morimanno]

thank you for the review =) and yes i thought it was really neat too =] just randomly had the idea haha