Talking to an Angel

How do you talk to an angel,

I don’t have words to define

It felt like it was not real,

Like an offer you can’t decline

 

She just stood there silently,

And I felt like losing all my senses

She might have thought of me behaving so strangely,

Even I don’t know what happens to me in her presence

 

Eyes sparkles

Whole body just wobbles

Heart starts beating so fastly

Seeing the face so lovely

Want to speak much

But words seems to stuck

 

In me is love spreading,

Inside me are bells ringing

All my love ready to pour on you,

Whenever i got a chance to meet you

 

Maybe she’s not the most beautiful girl in the world,

But she’s the princess and cannot be defined by a single word

It matters more what’s inside,

Rather than the artificial beauty outside

 

Then they say it’s nothing more than a crush,

She doesn’t even have thought about it yet

Please just get over this rush,

Listen us or you will have to regret

 

I only have this thing to say,

In the end its love that will prevail

Only if we knew future from the start,

Then what’s the point of living this life, sweetheart

Reviews

[DeletedUser]

To me, this poem reminds of a past love of mine. The same immense feelings I felt with him created vividly in your words. "In the end its love that will prevail.." Truer words have never been said. I liked this poem. It really helped to bring back some old memories-the good ones, the ones that shouldn't be forgot even through the pain.

[Joe Shetina]

Very good. Excellent poem.

[prodicallife]

XICOR,
Another beautifull, sweet, innocent and short sentenced talk. Lively poem kept me intact to it. I loved the way you said
Maybe she’s not the most beautiful girl in the world,
But she’s the princess and cannot be defined by a single word
It matters more what’s inside,
Rather than the artificial beauty outside
wonderfull write just a small mistake that i think is...

Then they say it’s nothing more than a crush,
She "wouldn`t" even have thought about it yet
It should be wouldn`t.....

Great piece of work..

Regards
PRODICAL

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This is so lovely, I enjoyed this write alot.

[Enigma]

What an adorable piece of poetry. I really liked it. Though at times, the rhymes seem kinda forced, overall, its a good poem. Well done. :)

[Veronica]

This is beautiful!

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yeah, you basically wrote what women want a man to feel about her. Yerp, it's great that you understand not only that but such a feeling was created into such a beautiful masterpiece. Awesome Poem! :)

[Teri B]

As I said in that other comment, "Faint heart never won fair lady!" You have to take the risk in order to be in the game!

[Black]

another nice poem,
i love the feeling behind it,
though it needs some shaving here and there
nicely penned

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Awesome poem, love the message and flow :)