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Bipolar

Bipolar

A Poem by xlunalovex
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Basically my friend wrote this for me! He doesn't use this site but all reviews will be given to him!

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You come closer
I shudder

You come closer
I melt like butter

When you approach
I am bipolar

© 2010 xlunalovex


Author's Note

xlunalovex
Kinda short and more freestyle than anything else!

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I like this. (: when I read it I think like you hate someone more then anything but at the same time you love them and could never let them go. short, simple.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Shudder, melt like butter... good feel about that bad feel. The flow to me was a little off but being bipolar is an off center flow.

Posted 8 Years Ago




short, simple, sweet and to the point, I love poems like that :]

Posted 8 Years Ago


Yes, it is short, but I like your choice of words. It has a lot of meaning and depth to it despite the length. Nice read. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


nice

Posted 8 Years Ago


Got your point across.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Short and simple, yet still effective! I liked it!

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Short and simple. But I like it. Nice construction.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on July 17, 2010
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xlunalovex
xlunalovex

Philly, PA



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Hey. So about me? I am basically a shy, smart girl. I am in all honor classes which means during the school year I will be on writer's cafe once in a while. I usually write about darkness and rain. Lo.. more..

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