Bipolar

Basically my friend wrote this for me! He doesn't use this site but all reviews will be given to him!

You come closer
I shudder

You come closer
I melt like butter

When you approach
I am bipolar

Author's Note

Kinda short and more freestyle than anything else!

Reviews

[violet michelle]

I like this. (: when I read it I think like you hate someone more then anything but at the same time you love them and could never let them go. short, simple.

[Amber Betty Marie Child..]

Shudder, melt like butter... good feel about that bad feel. The flow to me was a little off but being bipolar is an off center flow.

[**The-Excuse-Queen**]

short, simple, sweet and to the point, I love poems like that :]

[Madame Quill]

Yes, it is short, but I like your choice of words. It has a lot of meaning and depth to it despite the length. Nice read. :)

[KaySea]

nice

[Sharon]

Got your point across.

[Gracie-San]

Short and simple, yet still effective! I liked it!

[Seerose]

Short and simple. But I like it. Nice construction.