Fields Of Wheat And A Day

We hold hands and run through the

rolling fields of green,

Then watch the wind blow through the

waist-high wheat.

Above us, the sun shines bright, each

ray breaks through,

Gossamer, whimsical clouds, the sky

reflects a clear blue hue.

Carve our initials in the oak near the

creek,

Sit on the bridge and dangle our feet.

The birds fly overhead, their songs

echo by and by.

Only the gods and creation can observe

their cry.

Saunter along a little further, you tell me

stories of better days,

I get lost in the color of your eyes, your

smile, and your gaze.

Feel the warmth of the sun as each

golden ray continues searing,

And we arrive at our blanket by a tree in

a clearing.

The shadow and shade of that glorious

beast,

Brings a sigh from the both of us as

soon we feast.

A picnic lunch made just for us two,

And then a serenade, a song from you.

Your beautiful voice, the strum of your

guitar,

Humming lingers in the air to be carried

afar.

Not a thing can interrupt our day,

Not a phone, no cars, and no one in our

way.

We lie closely on a blanket and stare at

the sky,

While tender words exchange between

you and I.

In those fields of wheat and in our

hearts to stay,

A bond of affection was born that day.

Then suddenly, a crack of thunder from

a storm,

And sadly I awake to find that it’s morn.

Reviews

[EcstaticEuphoria]

I wanna live inside this dream so badly. It's everything i would dream for the perfect day and the perfect affection. If only dreams could be real... but wait maybe they are if only we dream then long enough.  Adore this piece and your rhythm. Keep it up!!

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful places and thoughts shared in the poetry. Dear Anastasia. You create places of sweetness and a storm at the end. A wild journey in your words. I liked the journey. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Surya]

I wanna enjoy these scenes you created in my life, hope for the day to come to you especially,....that was good scenery you captured with words, I loved the way you described....:)

[Mr.Writer]

Really good! Keep it up :)

[Suhd]

Love the poem. So rich in creating a mental image. The twist in the end is quite open to interpretation. Great work :) Thanks for sharing

[Stacy Purvis]

Thank you. I enjoy reading your reviews. 😘