Beauty

My eyes gaze upon your beauty 

Soft and glowing with splendor 

Such as none I have seen before 

Like a moth to a flame I am drawn 

Captivated, over-stimulated 

Speechless, dumb 

My mind is running and searching 

For a million different things to say 

Before I lose the chance and you 

Walk away..forever and I can’t 

Form the words, my mouth, 

My tongue is frozen in time 

And my hands begin to shake 

Whilst I imagine yours in mine 

You walk away and it occurs to me 

That while others see your flesh and bone 

I have only seen what I have known 

The beauty I see with my inner eye 

Is that of your heart, your soul, your mind.

Reviews

[aj milton]

Lovely... you are on a roll!

[eternal_serenity]

Beautiful poem!

[Taz]

I love the imagery in this poem, you did an awesome job.

[Writer's Heart]

This was so beautiful, that it made me cry! This is Amazing!

[Mr.Writer]

Omg... this is so good! Wow... great job Anastasia! So beautiful and creative! :)
"The beauty I see with my inner eye "
I don't know why, but I like this line alot! :D

[It Will Change]

I have only seen what I have known

The beauty I see with my inner eye

Is that of your heart, your soul, your

mind.

Awesome lines ...loved it :)

[andrew mitchell]

i enjoyed this, had lovely flow with smooth emotions to ride on, well done.

[Jonathan]

This poem is beautiful in itself. Honest and true to how we should look at others. The true beauty lies within.

[Joey Nizz]

Wonderful!
This is really a captivating write.

Thanks for sharing.

[Surya]

Last four lines captured me, something special in love rite....
well honestly I loved it..:)