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Forevermore

Forevermore

A Poem by Anastasia Purvis

Your heart beckons me to another time and place, 
A reminder of romance, of love, and a tender embrace. 
And I, captured like a moth to a flame, am paralyzed by your Light. 
Enraptured in your essence, I give up without a fight. 
I gaze lovingly upon your reflection and see, 
The very intimate and beautiful parts of me. 
To which my heart dances with yours forevermore, 
So shall we dance ’til the early light of a days new morn.

© 2017 Anastasia Purvis



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Woah! Did I also name my poem forevermore? Hmmm... yes I did! :D
Very good poem Anastasia! A short and sweet poem, very sweet poem of yours!
"I gaze lovingly upon your reflection and see,
The very intimate and beautiful parts of me. "
These are the best lines ever! Wow, so creative! Keep it up Anastasia! :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Mr.Writer

1 Year Ago

Your work and many others works inspire me to write more :)
Anastasia Purvis

1 Year Ago

Likewise! There is much passion and beauty to behold through another's eyes....
Mr.Writer

1 Year Ago

True that :)



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My heart fluttered to read this, such a great poem. Remembrance of those beautiful feelings, the time of pure joy and infatuation.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

What affection you show here! I love the fluidity of the lines, how each infuses into the other. This should win a prize in my book. Remarkable writing.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anastasia Purvis

1 Year Ago

Oh...Bless your little soul. Thank you :3
So sweet, Anastasia!
The third line is quite catchy:)
Loved it, my friend

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Anastasia Purvis

1 Year Ago

Heh...thank you. Many blessings xxx
"And I, captured like a moth to a flame, am paralyzed by your Light.
Enraptured in your essence, I give up without a fight.
I gaze lovingly upon your reflection and see,
The very intimate and beautiful parts of me."

Wow, I love the imagery. The last line is incredibly sweet in a naive and vulnerable way. Reminds me of young love.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Thank you all so much for your kind words! : )

Posted 1 Year Ago


Love is in the air, Spring is here.. passionate words drift the world to make music for all to hear!

Beautiful poetry, Anastatia, you create such lovely phrases, 'I gaze lovingly upon your reflection and see, - The very intimate and beautiful parts of me. '

What more can a woman say to carry her lover's heart safe forever more!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"And I, captured like a moth to a flame, am paralyzed by your Light."
I love the way this line shows the destruction love can bring upon ourselves. This piece is definitely one of my favorites I've read. Amazing job!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Old places and memories. They can sneak-up on us. I liked the honest and thoughts in the words. Thank you Anastasia for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really enjoy your writing style. Particularly when you write more than three phrases *lol*. Great read!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A poem that can bring you back , stop you in your tracks and make you feel what you felt decades ago to the point you feel it in the now, is a good poem.
:)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Anastasia Purvis
Anastasia Purvis

Cincinnati *The Queen City*, OH



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