Cereal Killer

Cereal Killer
In Darkness He Plays Until
The Bowl Is Empty 🥄

Reviews

[W1STER1A]

This is very witty and clever. Personally, I'm typically not a fan of haikus, but the puns and conciseness of this poem are used artfully, adding to the poem rather than retracting from it.

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She or he have done,so far very clean job.

[Einstein Noodle]

what creative word playing ... the two images conjured for me so contrasting ..one a two year old with Fruit Loops" ..the other a homicidal psychopath draining blood from a victim ...well done senryu Anastasia!
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[MaximumFlight]

First, this sounds like a SERIAL killer. Second, wonderful job :)

[Sammie Sanchez]

Sugar and Spice and Everything Dark, huh? lol

[Ted Kniffen]

Must be all that sugar. Good one Ana

[Hebe]

You make cereal so versatile. .... who knows what lurks in the box!

[duff]

You can imagine many different things with this one. Going the sinister avenue is the fun one. I've always said you have the haiku on lock down. You never fail to impress. Great stuff.

[Tony Jordan]

Lol - this is clever and witty. Could be a whole serial of these
Inspiring it is ...

may I...

cereal playboy
he's crazy about f**king
early morning fare

[Coyote Poetry]

Very nice use of words. I have three cereal killers at my house. Thank you Anastasia for sharing the entertaining poetry.
Coyote