Greener Pastures

Greener Pastures

A Poem by Anastasia Purvis
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Not Just A Poem, A CD, too. Coming #SOON

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The Greener Pastures
Are Where You Choose To Water
Better Days Await

© 2017 Anastasia Purvis



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Wish to see those greener pastures and better days coming...

Posted 2 Months Ago


straight to the point and nice...weldone

Posted 2 Months Ago


Well written haiku. Love the thought. Green pastures on hot days.

Posted 2 Months Ago


A very interesting haiku. When you are working with so few syllables, every sound is precious - I wonder if you could get some more oomph out of the first syllable by saying "my" greener pastures, rather than just any old greener pastures ;)

Posted 2 Months Ago


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Great piece. Thanks for sharing!

Posted 2 Months Ago


These words grabbed my attention, I was looking for more...

On another note, I'm new here. I submitted a poem also, 'Aurora Borealis -Sept 16/17. I have no reviews, and I'm not sure it's out there for people to see. Would you mind searching it for me? I see other poems and would love to share my writing with everyone. Thanks. Looking for more from you...

Posted 2 Months Ago


sometimes the grass can become just as green on this side of the fence, if we are patient and feed the positive thoughts.

nicely done.
j.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very true. Short but right on the money. At times the greenest pastures can exist right under our noses and we do not know it. All the best with the CD!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree. We decide our path. Better to look for greener path and hopeful place. Thank you Anastasia for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I wish to feel the same these days. Like how this conveys positive vibes! (:

Posted 2 Months Ago



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Anastasia Purvis
Anastasia Purvis

Cincinnati *The Queen City*, OH



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Altruistic Enigmatic Polymath | Writer, Vegetarian, Musician, EMT. I'm an Artist. I paint pictures of the verbal kind. ♕ The Queen City ♛ more..

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