Greener Pastures

Not Just A Poem, A CD, too. Coming #SOON

The Greener Pastures
Are Where You Choose To Water
Better Days Await

Reviews

[Suhd]

Like the imagery told in a few words. Keep sharing Anastasia.

[Jes' Pi]

Better Days Always Await...
very nice

[The Exiled Wolf]

Wish to see those greener pastures and better days coming...

[David Adedokun]

straight to the point and nice...weldone

[Ted Kniffen]

Well written haiku. Love the thought. Green pastures on hot days.

[Dargan]

A very interesting haiku. When you are working with so few syllables, every sound is precious - I wonder if you could get some more oomph out of the first syllable by saying "my" greener pastures, rather than just any old greener pastures ;)

[Ty]

Great piece. Thanks for sharing!

[Nancy T. Words Move Me]

These words grabbed my attention, I was looking for more...

On another note, I'm new here. I submitted a poem also, 'Aurora Borealis -Sept 16/17. I have no reviews, and I'm not sure it's out there for people to see. Would you mind searching it for me? I see other poems and would love to share my writing with everyone. Thanks. Looking for more from you...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

sometimes the grass can become just as green on this side of the fence, if we are patient and feed the positive thoughts.

nicely done.
j.

[Seeker]

Very true. Short but right on the money. At times the greenest pastures can exist right under our noses and we do not know it. All the best with the CD!