The Last Hit Off This Love

I'm just a space inbetween your words aren't I?

Just that little thought that tells you to turn around when you're walking down the dark alley,

and the one holding your hand when they rush you to the hospital.

Maybe while I'm here they'll stop the bleeding in my heart,

and with every hit you take,

you're suffocating the part of me that is monentously in love with you.

I thought you would change,

if I gave you a reason,

but maybe I was wrong.

Perhaps I should just give up,

because I find little credence that the part of me loving you,

can stand the smoke that's filling my heart.

Do drugs really mean enough to lose me for?

And in the ultimadium of apprehention will you hold me tight and promise me forever

or just turn your back and close your eyes,

upon what you've done to me.

The kids sitting right down the hall when you read this,

do you think this is what they want for their sister.

I thought they meant something,

I thought I meant something,

but have the drugs clouded your thoughts to the extent where you can't see the pain,

in their eyes,

and in mine?

Just put it down for a minute or two,

promise it'll be alright,

that this will stop and you're going to change,

because this is the last day I spend like this.

Reviews

[Courtney Elizabeth]

awww babe its so sad but i love it :)

[Krazy On The Outside]

I really like this poem, too. =)
These lines are my favorite "Maybe while I'm here they'll stop the bleeding in my heart, and with every hit you take"