A Tired Soul

An Angel guiding a soul x

Blow away the cobwebs.
Dust away the dark.
Come into the light.
Start a brand new spark.

Leave all those memory's.
That hurt your tired soul.
Come into the warmth.
Away from the cold.

Upon your face, draw a smile.
Put a sparkle in your eye.
Come to us, stay awhile.
No more will you cry.

Look behind you and say goodbye.
Take my hand and up we fly. xxx

Reviews

[Dean Kuch®]

This has an airy, inspirational tone to it. Death is a part of life's natural cycle. We all have to face it one day. So, as we carry on throughout life's journey, we can only hope to:
"Blow away the cobwebs.
Dust away the dark.
Come into the light.
Start a brand new spark..." (loved that first stanza!) Great write.

[Bats In The Belfry]

Whimsical, enjoyable and it made me smile. You have a great imagination.

[L. Edward Neale]

We can fly! We can fly! We can fly! Very uplifting. Literally! Thank you for your wonderful inspiration.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A terribly cute and also spiritually satisfing piece that glows, well done, good read.

[marytownsend]

Very nicely written! Angels encouraging and guiding untill we say goodbye!

[Coyote Poetry]

"Look behind you and say goodbye.
Take my hand and up we fly. xxx"
Sometime all it takes is a friend with a smile and hope to save us. Thank you for the outstanding poetry.
Coyote