l'Anxiété......

l'Anxiété......

A Poem by Roy
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My first trip abroad a fortnight hence.... and my feelings...??

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Alien nation.
Butterflies in my stomach.
The Deutsch sky beckons.

© 2008 Roy


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Ingenously written. The poem offers a lot without actually revealing much in its wake. An intruging Haiku, if I ever read one.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very short, I got confused at first, I wasn't sure what to think of it but then I realised what you meant and the poem became clearer. xxxxx Well Done! xx

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nicely shown up in three lines
your apprehension!

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

an interesting take on the prospect of travel, one i fully understand, having only recently embarked on such a trip myself. i like the last line; very cool.

Posted 17 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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