Four Seasons

Four Seasons

A Poem by Yaooooooo

Four Seasons

By

Jose M. Euvin

 

The winter came

Destroyed my summer

My love was gone

It soon was over

 

My tears will drop

Wash with the rain

In spring I’ll die

From all the pain

 

The heavens will cry

That summer day

I lost my love

The day she went  away

 

In fall you’ll mourn

Tears will rain

In heaven my love

I’ll always wait

 

© 2008 Yaooooooo


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If you put these poems in a book I will buy them because I love them I think they are so amazing

Posted 12 Years Ago


Using the seasons to express your feelings rings true with this poem. Love gone in winter-a barren landscape. Tears for the spring showers and dark autumn days can feel full of mourning. And your tears will reign in heaven, as you wait. A great write! Barbara

Posted 15 Years Ago


Wow, a very deep and expressive write. Heartfelt and beautiful!

Posted 15 Years Ago


Very emotional write. Pulls at the heart strings of love and loss, beautiful.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Whoa! Different. ;) I like how you parallel the seasons with emotion. ^^ Definitely cool... but where's autumn??? lol jk. Very well-done! :)

Ironically Yours, Blade and Blood

Posted 16 Years Ago


really nicely done! Wonderful write!

Great rhyme!

~Frances~

Posted 16 Years Ago


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I'm really liking your rhyme scheme on here.
I like that you can intertwine more than one subject into a poem.
Not many people can, sadly.
Good job.
=]

Posted 16 Years Ago


This is a very beautiful and heartfelt piece, holding very sensitive emotion. Each stanza is well thought out and perfectly formed. Best wishes, Bethlynne.

Posted 16 Years Ago


it is beautiful - sad - mourning the loss of love throughout the seasons -- but so beautifully written...

Posted 16 Years Ago



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