Love

Love

A Poem by lawrence bear
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Something that was on my mind,

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Love
 
In sad times we must stand tall,
Hearts those are broken.
We must show strength,
Memories are our token.
 
Be brave and strong,
It’s okay to show tears,
Memories we cherish,
Love lasts through out the years.
 
Love is not a word,
Love is love.
Shining brightly,
Sharing its warmth from heaven above.
 
I am forever smiling now,
I know you are feeling blue.
I will always and forever,
Love, and watch, over you.
 
 
Written by Lawrence bear

© 2009 lawrence bear


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Well written, but the last stanza just seems like my heart was speaking, and for this to be your words i relatively relate. Very well done

Posted 8 Years Ago


What I enjoyed most of this poem was the rhyming.
And from your whole poem, I enjoyed reading the last stanza:

"I am forever smiling now,
I know you are feeling blue.
I will always and forever,
Love, and watch, over you"

From the last stanza, it's the last line that actually caught my eyes a bit more :)
Nicely written...

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love is funny like that. It can give a man air to soar the heavens or it can crush his heart into dust. It is hard to get over a heart break and then to love again with trust but love always finds away around that obstacle of fear. I have a love affair with love itself. Very nice and good write.

Posted 9 Years Ago


You have written such lovely words of comfort, much like a father looking after the well being of his child.

"I am forever smiling now"

......lasting and beautiful words of endearment that shall surely encourage and bless readers!

Nicely done Lawrence!

Posted 9 Years Ago


What a lovely sentiment. Nicely done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


What a lovely poem. I can see you
comforting someone as I read it.

Tina

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is such a wonderful write here.
I can feel the devtion.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think this is a very layered piece. I feel love and loss within the words.

...or maybe I'm just putting my own baggage into it. :)

Good piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a very beautiful piece. So full of everlasting devotion. You did an excellent job on this piece.

Posted 10 Years Ago



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