My life

My life

A Poem by lawrence bear
"

battle through a weak moment

"

 

 

Here I stand,

at the edge of a cliff.

My life,

wondering, it makes no diff.

 

It already feels,

like I am falling.

My life,

choices keep stalling.

 

My heart,

how it aches.

My life,

nothing but mistakes.

 

All my life,

I have sinned.

My life,

is nothing but the wind.

 

With each moment,

that passes by.

Without you,

it feels like I'm gonna die.

 

These moments,

that turn into days.

All because,

of my drinking ways.

 

Forgive me,

I am sorry.

My life, without you,

seems so blurry.

 

Lord help me,

before I come crashing down.

Sooth my weeping heart,

hold me and keep me bound.

 

© 2011 lawrence bear


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There's so much in this for me. Sometimes we have to experience a death to a certain part of who we are to move forward..and in that moment it truely feels as though it's the physical death that is the answer.
Sins are stepping stones to growth..and movement forward so I never sit in it..I thank the sin and set it free to the four winds and ask that it be returned cleansed and with love and light.. And the ties that bind the heart are the hardest to cut free and give us freedom to rise beyond it all.. hmm lots for me to think about with this one;) xx

Posted 12 Years Ago


Beautiful. Right from the soul.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Your poem was very riviting, it was very well written and very in depth. It was as if you had gotten into my thoughts.



Posted 12 Years Ago


Heart felt writing here! Very emotional and well expressed!

Posted 13 Years Ago


I really liked this write Lawrence, It's really emotional and touching.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I think we have all been here. Just keep looking up at the sun and the blue skies.

Posted 13 Years Ago


it may feel like your alone but your not. i cant definitely feel the vibe that you were going for keep up the good work

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Fisher River, Northern Manitoba, Canada



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