Free To Be Me

Free To Be Me

A Poem by potato

Free,
To let it go,
So I can be me,
Cause my past was my foe,
Free
Free,
No longer in a cage,
And everyone can see me,
When I turn the next page,
Free
Free,
To live by my rules,
And be who I want to be,
Without all the fools,
Free

© 2014 potato


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Let it go and soar. Spread the winds you always knew you had, but never knew what to do with. Test them, stretch them dust off the metal dust of weight.BE FREE!!!!!!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


potato

9 Years Ago

Yes!! Thank you.
You did a great job with the structure and maintaining the rhyme scheme. The message was very powerful too

Posted 9 Years Ago


potato

9 Years Ago

Thank you, I usually write with very strong messages.
Congratulations!

This piece is a finalist for Promote Me! VI (Peace).
As your reward I have sent 115 read requests on your behalf.

Voting is open until 10/15/14.
http://www.writerscafe.org/contests/Promote-Me%21-VI-%28Peace%29/50367/

Good luck and keep writing!

Posted 9 Years Ago


potato

9 Years Ago

Thank you!!

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Added on August 10, 2014
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Tags: Freedom, poetry, free, let it go, past, live

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