Just Breath.......

Just Breath.......

A Poem by potato

You,
It was you,
Who I thought of,
As I,
Wrote but then,
 tore,
Up that note,
As I began to cry,
Because I knew,
 Today,
I was not going to die.....

Just always know,
That it was you,
You who I,
Thought of,
As I stopped,
And decided to,
Just,
Breath...

© 2014 potato


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Loved it!! adding it to my library if you don't mind.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Fantastic. Really well written. I like that the rhythm of this poem is so staggered.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Oh wow so beautiful and powerful.


God will put the people
we need in our lives can be a blessing.


This put me to tears I've lost a young cousin
in law and great grandpa and
young friend to suicide but we always wish
that something could of stop it from happening.


This touched my heart strings
thank you for sharing.

God bless Benita

Posted 8 Years Ago


potato

8 Years Ago

Oh thank you. I have really had a tough time and writing things like this always help me cope. My be.. read more
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Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet

8 Years Ago

I've lost 2 family members and a
young friend to suicide on here I forget his
name b.. read more
This just really resonates with me ... powerful.

Posted 9 Years Ago


potato

9 Years Ago

thank you for your review
The structure and idea compliment each other. I have to compliment you on a rare and distinguished thought process. Short, brief, packed with punch!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

potato

9 Years Ago

Thank you!

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I love to write,I always have. Writing has always been my escape to my own little world and out of the terrifying one I was living in. I love to write fiction,but with some true stories of my life and.. more..

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