18. Solitaire

18. Solitaire

A Chapter by Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse



 

I dressed you with flowers, put stars in your eye

Gold painted hair, snow on skin

Rainbow on your lips where raindrops die

Roses on your cheeks, there is no Sin

 

Mountains on your fingers, rivers in your veins

Ocean in your heart, red as wine

This love that stains

A seal that’s mine

 

Clouds on your feet, stairs of crystal

Moon and Sun on your chest, left and right

Lungs full of sparks, lightning bristles

Thunder in your mouth, fire passion bright

 

Crowned your head with beautiful aurora

Diamonds on your ears beautiful glow

Tree in your stomach, fruits and flora

And there a planet inside slowly grows

 

Incense of love perfumed my soul.



© 2017 Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse


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This is a compelling & originally-stated message. I had to go back & check the title after reading it, then the connection hit me. This is an imaginary lover. Your descriptions are nicely teetering on the edge of outlandish, but also brushing more conventional understanding, so that the overall portrait is "out there" in a delicious way.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

6 Years Ago

Yes, the chronicle of a spiritual wife. This ghost lover I decicded to love before finding a real lo.. read more
you're a born writer I can admit!
classy, just classy

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

6 Years Ago

I thank you for the ever so kindness
"Incense of love perfumed my soul."

Love does feel like that and we feel drenched in the perfume only too often...


Posted 6 Years Ago


"This love that stains"
I like thinking of love as a stain for regardless of if good or not, there will always be affects of it on our heart. Every love influences us, whether negatively or positively. Great read as usual :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

6 Years Ago

Thank you very much, it seems your still searching through the pages, but sadly there is only one la.. read more
A.L.

6 Years Ago

Keeping us all on the edge of our seats I see...
second last line is money...
i really like this
it could be interpreted in a few ways
love for mother earth or love for a woman who gave birth to your heart

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

6 Years Ago

Ahhhh, thank you for enjoying this artful write. Yes, it does sound like mother nature. She is beaut.. read more
Papaya

6 Years Ago

she is indeed, a real beauty
Wow this is really pretty. I really like this. Beautiful picture in my head now.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

8 Years Ago

Thanks! :) haven't written one in a while
Lovely, well done full marks great words

Posted 8 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

8 Years Ago

Thank you very much! :D

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Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

Worcester, MA



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My writing is strongly based on science, culture, myths and fantasy. I do enjoy poem writing but short stories are my passion, I am developing a few novels as well. I am looking for any critique that .. more..

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