Inception of Fount

Inception of Fount

A Chapter by Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse
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Read and enjoy

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In empty space came a light above

a sleeping idea no one knew of

from tact's and tills came out these four

and little by little began to explore


A trickling spark, a humid flame

a feeling of warmth no one could tame

It starts off small to grow insane

sizzle, burn, fire is its name


A cool breeze or rushing heat

its melodies bitter, often sweet

It carries faces on a fleet

the swift winds that often meet


Sway swish, splish splash 

acid rain from all the ash

it cools and chills, swallows in a dash

a tempest of water for waves to crash


Pound hard, stomp loud

strong as rock, shape of a cloud

cling clash, shakes with sound

make way for the quakes and ground


tossed here, tossed there
tossed about every where 
until the world is settled calm
I strive to keep her safe from harm



© 2017 Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse


Author's Note

Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse
Quick writes, Thanks my Ivy

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"tossed here, tossed there
tossed about every where
until the world is settled calm
I strive to keep her safe from harm"

I love this stanza. Although it gives me the feeling that you're just waiting for the world to calm down and then would leave her be... I liked the imagery too.
Nicely penned :))

Posted 6 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

6 Years Ago

This is one of my favorite writings ive worked on thank you for noticing it
Dr. YumnaKay

6 Years Ago

You're welcome 😊😊
Wow to mehis is perfect I love the imagery and the feeling behind it all it speaks loud of you Mr. Ego lover

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

7 Years Ago

Why thank you. Yes, not an ego lover 😊
Writing Angel

7 Years Ago

great work
I read it and i enjoyed it.
half way through this i felt a desire, an urge to read this in a story form. The images you painted were surreal. The words you chose were point-blank perfect. Amazing work

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

7 Years Ago

Many thanks to you friend.
Saud Maroof

7 Years Ago

no problem
I like your style :) This is elegantly voiced and gave me many thoughts. You have created a world within that speaks volumes, beautiful! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

7 Years Ago

Why, thank you kindly, I appreciate the stop
Beautifully written! I absolutely enjoyed this. Great job!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

7 Years Ago

thank you dear
Lana Huskins

7 Years Ago

No problem!
Wow, such phenomenal imagery within its own simplicity! This is one of my favorites of yours!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

7 Years Ago

Oh no no, this was just a very quick write. I remain humble towards it. Thank you!
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Love this!
Really great!

The sway swish stanza was super. Great momentum.
May I send you a suggestion?

Posted 7 Years Ago


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7 Years Ago

I'm going to anyway...
Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

7 Years Ago

Haha anything from you Poison!
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7 Years Ago

I just sent it. Just a suggestion.
Beautiful imagery. I get the feeling this is a double entendre?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse

7 Years Ago

You caught me. I thought I could keep it concealed but you got it all through.

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Worcester, MA



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My writing is strongly based on science, culture, myths and fantasy. I do enjoy poem writing but short stories are my passion, I am developing a few novels as well. I am looking for any critique that .. more..

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