what you wanted

A Poem by yuki emo

is this what you wanted to she me cry because thats what you got here i am wanting to die when your with her i find my razor never to deep to see me cry well thats what you got

© 2009 yuki emo

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Zeitgeist_Manifesto

I like abstract things. This is unusual. The Grammar police would flame it,
but given the subject matter, its perfect. The wording was perfect and
adds to the intensity of the situation. There is this frantic chaos.
The energy is frightening. Great job.

Posted 4 Months Ago

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Added on November 6, 2009

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yuki emo

eatonvile, WA

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lets see i have black hair im 15 you my think im to young to know the feeling of loss love and lust but i have been though alot in my 15 years im a great person i love to write, draw, paint you name .. [more]