Lost

To people who think that love is real 

I wish they could see the broken hearts 

And shattered dreams 

That have uptil now ruined 

the ones who believed in love at once 

Could it have been so fast 

This turn of emotions, this change of heart 

I ask myself why this has been so 

Why they changed why they go 

For love, real love is barely found and never kept 

This is the thought that keeps me at the go

Reviews

[Kesha]

Love & Life is pain, without it what would be the meaning of existing? You can't protect anybody from it, it's always going to get you but sometimes love & life can be good, you just have to open yourself up. This was a wonderful write on someone who seems to have given up on love. Nicely penned

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Oh lol i'd forgotten this too. It seems a long time ago that I wrote this..
I agree with your points but somehow it feels theoretical to me.. I haven't given up, just having tried it yet..
thank you for your thoughts here, Kesha. I appreciate it :)

[Kesha]

Haha I know the feeling, hopefully you find love someday, it is a wonderful feeling :) you are very welcome :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I very much doubt it ;)

[Kesha]

Lol oh shush ;P

[Lorry]

It is a wonder that anyone can't feel this at some point in their lives, when it is so sought after, yet so easily broken. Beautifully captured.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

It is my believe that whatever our experiences, in essence the feelings are mutual.

[aLittlePain]

Lovely expression, slightly melancholic. I appreciate your perspective, and your words reflect your youth. I say that with sincere warmth. Regards Ray.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you Ray! I think poetry is all about maintaining the youth whatever age you reach.

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes you are right.
"For love, real love is barely found and never kept
This is the thought that keeps me at the go"
Love is rare. We must embrace the days of love and than love shall change. With our real children. We will understand what love can be. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry,
Coyote

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you! Glad you appreciated it.

[Coyote Poetry]

I did and you are welcome.