Look Around

Look Around

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Dedicated to Tony Jordon. This will have to do for now ;)

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Whenever you cry,
whenever you fall,
look around -
I am here,
at a moment's call.

Feeling sad?
Feeling down?
Look around -
I am here,
won't let you drown.
 
Make a wish,
don't be shy,
look around -
I am here,
just give it a try.



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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A simple and beautiful assurance to a friend. Appreciated all the more as try I could I can't promise to be there always for even my closest friends, being moody and feckless by nature. Tony is a great person and writer and he deserves all the love and support. Great going YumnaKay!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I've always meant to be there for those I care about. And TJ is one of those people.
I agree.. read more
DIVYA

1 Year Ago

Its an exceptional human quality. One thats truly admirable. You are welcome 😊



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Strange how people alter over time,. how what was once sweet talk becomes bitter bile! And yet you've always been a cure-all, Yumna, turning the other cheek whilst being there.. always. Blessings and just a few wishes..

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Strange indeed. I do intend to remain the same for the ones I'm close to and I'm glad to have made s.. read more
emmajoy

10 Months Ago

We're all children - and should be - deep inside, Yumna and there's no sin in that. After all, when .. read more
And here I am looking around

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Oh well, you know... ;)
Great tribute to solid friendship - expressed in a simplistic poetic style!
اچھا لکھا گیا

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Phill Oz O'fee

1 Year Ago

I am not proficient - but know a few expressions!
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Cool! You will definitely know this then,
شكريّة 😇
Phill Oz O'fee

1 Year Ago

And ... thank you as well!
Simple, friendly poem, I will give a try, haha..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Hey, thank you! It's all the matter of finding the right ones 😊
You are true to your word Yumna - you are there for your friends. Such wonderful sentiments. I deeply appreciate this lovely gesture. I am humbled.
I hope your day has went well..?
:))

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tony Jordan

1 Year Ago

We always get the neggy news - what positive things are we missing out on? :))
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Haha yeah I know that! Media shows it like they want people to know..
You've seriously got m.. read more
Tony Jordan

1 Year Ago

There are a few countries who we only hear the negative news from - Russia and Cuba and China among .. read more
Elegantly captured and calming poetry.
Well done! Cheers!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, Tazeen, for the nice words and appreciation 😊
Indeed, simple, graceful and beautiful in its sentiments.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you, John Alexander! I appreciate it 😊
A simple and beautiful assurance to a friend. Appreciated all the more as try I could I can't promise to be there always for even my closest friends, being moody and feckless by nature. Tony is a great person and writer and he deserves all the love and support. Great going YumnaKay!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I've always meant to be there for those I care about. And TJ is one of those people.
I agree.. read more
DIVYA

1 Year Ago

Its an exceptional human quality. One thats truly admirable. You are welcome 😊
These look like they could be song lyrics. Maybe you could try putting some music to them?

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thats what I thought. But unfortunately I have no idea how that works. Thanks for the review ☺
you talk good here. seems, you be a holy moly goddess who craves to spread love, lights, and peace around the world... in the wake of love at all. quite an inspirational poetry you licked in!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Lol seriously 😂😂
Adams

1 Year Ago

again it depends on "your" mood how you wanna take on this. haha!
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ofcourse 😉

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