Look Around

Look Around

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Dedicated to Tony Jordon. This will have to do for now ;)

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Whenever you cry,
whenever you fall,
look around -
I am here,
at a moment's call.

Feeling sad?
Feeling down?
Look around -
I am here,
won't let you drown.
 
Make a wish,
don't be shy,
look around -
I am here,
just give it a try.



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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A simple and beautiful assurance to a friend. Appreciated all the more as try I could I can't promise to be there always for even my closest friends, being moody and feckless by nature. Tony is a great person and writer and he deserves all the love and support. Great going YumnaKay!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I've always meant to be there for those I care about. And TJ is one of those people.
I agree.. read more
ProseRose

1 Year Ago

Its an exceptional human quality. One thats truly admirable. You are welcome 😊



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This is such a sweet poem! :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Gullia! I'm glad you liked it. ☺
Good friends, like this are precious! We must look after those relationships. Lovely piece. R xo

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Rach, for the kind review :)
Beautiful words, that need to be heard by someone, to know that they are not alone in the world. I hope you are heard by them my friend.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you! I intend to be heard ☺
A wonderful offer from a beautiful soul.
We need people like you.

Phoenix

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Pheonix for the compliment. I appreciate your kind words ☺
PhoenixDown

1 Year Ago

You are most welcome.
This is simple and fanciful, but all need this sentiment at times.

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Indeed yes, and thank you for the review :)
Look around... It gives such a postive vibe... Having tge assurance of someone being there for us is one of the best feelings... Beautiful words.. :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you! Indeed yes, the reassurance we get when we know that someone has our back is comforting t.. read more
a good friend is hard to come by

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

You are right. It does take time finding the right one.
A sweet song, penned with a soft reassuring voice.

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for liking and reviewing ☺
This sounds spiritual in nature, giving the one reading a sense of comfort and assurance. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the kind words Grey! I am glad you liked it. ☺

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