Musings Of A Lost Soul

Musings Of A Lost Soul

A Chapter by Closed

Wounds marked on my soul
Make me wonder what I did 
To get them, to earn them
These scars have uncovered a new way
For me to fly away
To not care 
To not flare 
Now don't you dare 
Come near
You don't affect me anymore 
The way you did before
I am gonna go
Coz I'm a lost soul 
Without a goal 



© 2017 Closed



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lost soul.. without goal? and wounded as well? wow! quite an fascinating poetry you have come up with. love leaves its flawless scars on the breath of body that further... and oft. awakes 'em all overnight. very nice musing you got, sweetlips. nice imagery here!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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1 Year Ago

Seems to me as if you mock me(kidding)😂 but thanks
Adams

1 Year Ago

if that's okay to throw some smiles on your face, even mocking your breath ain't gonna too bad. xoxo
Closed

1 Year Ago

Err thanks 😉



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I dont think you should let the surrounding decide your inside. Theres always going to be that little rock that makes you trip, it doesnt mean you stay buried in the floor, you should always come back from it

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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9 Months Ago

you know what, I like your philosophies a lot :)
lost soul.. without goal? and wounded as well? wow! quite an fascinating poetry you have come up with. love leaves its flawless scars on the breath of body that further... and oft. awakes 'em all overnight. very nice musing you got, sweetlips. nice imagery here!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

1 Year Ago

Seems to me as if you mock me(kidding)😂 but thanks
Adams

1 Year Ago

if that's okay to throw some smiles on your face, even mocking your breath ain't gonna too bad. xoxo
Closed

1 Year Ago

Err thanks 😉
Yes, this happens. Our wounds make us indifferent to things first and later to people. I also have similar thought..
The pain definitely is there and will be there but the resolution is clear, the message is very clear..
Again a beautifully crafted touching write...
Keep up the good work, YumnaKay!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much Bala, for your kind words. Pain wil always be felt to those of us who care.
Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

You are welcome, this a perfect write.. But I have a suggestion if you don't mind.. The second line.. read more
Closed

1 Year Ago

I don't mind. You pointed out the right thing. Thank you. Please feel free to correct me wherever yo.. read more
Sad, yet honest words from the heart. I have felt this. When you feel your soul has gone, is just when you need it the most.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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1 Year Ago

True indeed. There are people around here who do feel that but the main thing is to cope up with the.. read more
I think the ending is rather tragic but unfortunately very real for those people who give up on life.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Closed

1 Year Ago

Every person in life goes through a situation where they do give up on life even if it is for a seco.. read more
Closed

1 Year Ago

Yes, if survive it all then we do become either stronger or desensitized. But we're survivors.
Closed

1 Year Ago

Indeed, I agree with you.

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Added on November 1, 2016
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