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Nowhere To Hide

Nowhere To Hide

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

Feeling this universe closing in upon me
With nowhere to go
Nowhere to hide
The suffocation, the heat
Heart says to let it be
That the time will pass
That it will be okay
Find the horizon, can't you see
But I'm at crossroads
Of where to go
Where to flee
In this troubling world in which 
There is nothing
For me



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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You are still young... Darker times than you could ever dream of lay in wait for you my friend. Or maybe you will get lucky and avoid this curse of despair for a time. At any rate, I've been where this poem takes you. I visit often. I have a different perspective on it, but misery is close to my own heart so it's interesting to view the spawn of misery in others. I'm glad you found a bit of light since writing this. This was fairly well constructed although a tad simplistic. More brutal and stark than eloquent or introspective but that is ok sometimes. Keep writing!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

This was indeed written a long time ago, I think (and write) differently now ;) thank you for your t.. read more



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You are still young... Darker times than you could ever dream of lay in wait for you my friend. Or maybe you will get lucky and avoid this curse of despair for a time. At any rate, I've been where this poem takes you. I visit often. I have a different perspective on it, but misery is close to my own heart so it's interesting to view the spawn of misery in others. I'm glad you found a bit of light since writing this. This was fairly well constructed although a tad simplistic. More brutal and stark than eloquent or introspective but that is ok sometimes. Keep writing!

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

4 Months Ago

This was indeed written a long time ago, I think (and write) differently now ;) thank you for your t.. read more
How would you know? Have you dived in the deepest depths of the Ocean? HAve you reached out to the highest point of the sky? Have you trancended throught the endless galaxies of the universe? Have you caught the last number within time? Tell me there is nothing one more time and I will call you a liar. There is SOMETHING out there!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Oh, this was a long time ago and I think differently now.. there is of course something out there, n.. read more
Good emphasis on the last line. It feels very final.

Might I suggest splitting this poem into two verses? I feel like there needs to be a break to breathe somewhere in between. (But maybe that's what you were going for?)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Hey thats a good idea, I'll work on that. Thanks for the advice ☺
"In this troubling world in which
There is nothing
For me.. "

i believe, yeah.. sometimes, it's so suffocating eve'n to understand what exactly the G-world's 'bout, & what its F-people are supposed to be... cos, everyone wants peace, perhaps, none gets anything outta its league. ouch! may be, its cos.. the world's already manipulated by true shades of love-vibes, unknowingly which... makes their hearts' so vulnerable either to live or to hide. very well licked! you always "escort" yourself in such "squirting" words very finely for sure. keep it up!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you! You are very kind. I'm just an amateur writer. But people like you here give the courage .. read more
Adams

1 Year Ago

scrawls into... ? what creation? wow. could be a title for my new write. xoxo
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Hahaha then go ahead 😉
Absolutely love this poem! I feel like you wrote about me.. I have no words, it's beautiful!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

No one is, the key is in finding like-minded people.☺
Giullia King

1 Year Ago

So true! I'm happy we have each other!
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes we do 😘
This is that moment when you feel time is standing still and the you have a roundabout of emotions.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes I agree, and therein lies the irony that we are alone to decide whether to walk along or stop in.. read more
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You have written this feeling well. An enjoyable poem. Cheers Starz

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it ☺
We always feel this kinda fewlong in our lives.. But then we always have someone to be there with us.. :) don't we?... Loved the expressions..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes we do.. But not everyone is so lucky to have someone to be there for us. I hope you do. Thanks f.. read more
Gurharmanpreet

1 Year Ago

I wish the same for u and you are welcome.. 😊
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Aww thanks buddy ☺
I understand this feeling very well, and you described it well too. I believe the emphasis on "For me" is very powerful.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I wanted to describe it the way it feels to
most of us. And therein lies the dilemma that we .. read more
Michael Iam Bone

1 Year Ago

no problem :)

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