Burning

Burning

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

You left me burning inside
And now you want me back
But the day you went 
Was the day I died
Not the body,
The soul is dead
Those feelings when you were beside
Can not come back, 
So step aside
You left me burning inside
Though I opened for you, my heart wide
Now I'm buried alive
Tell me is there any place to hide
Where you, I can cast aside?





© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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"Those feelings when you were beside
Can not come back.. "

very captivating, catchy, realistic, & hypothetically a very true thought of sorbet you "squirt" yourself in. may be, you have a deep understanding of love, or may be, it's just some unbroken-ness that burn you so alive even in age prime every night you miss the night since... "he was next you, beside..." beautiful poetry. so deep. heartfelt. and purely well blended with the goblet of emotionalism for sure!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes, a deep understanding and the fact that I have watched countless people going insane after it. T.. read more
Adams

1 Year Ago

ahan... love makes us all insane. even sanity got nothing to with love at all. xoxo
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes indeed



Reviews

"Those feelings when you were beside
Can not come back.. "

very captivating, catchy, realistic, & hypothetically a very true thought of sorbet you "squirt" yourself in. may be, you have a deep understanding of love, or may be, it's just some unbroken-ness that burn you so alive even in age prime every night you miss the night since... "he was next you, beside..." beautiful poetry. so deep. heartfelt. and purely well blended with the goblet of emotionalism for sure!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes, a deep understanding and the fact that I have watched countless people going insane after it. T.. read more
Adams

1 Year Ago

ahan... love makes us all insane. even sanity got nothing to with love at all. xoxo
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes indeed
When it is gone, it is gone, no matter how they wish they could turn back the clock, just like we once did before when we were left burnt by them before. Nicely captured my friend.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes, I agree with you. How much we want that the times could reverse but that does not happen. Some .. read more
Really classy.. Very unpredictable it is how people change.. One moment they are with you and the next they aren't...

Posted 1 Year Ago


This an excellent piece! Very intense and heartfelt.
This write is beautiful in every aspect , the emotions, the expression, the words and intensity. It is short, direct and touching. I see a very intense writer here. Well done YumnaKay , very well done !
Love, betrayal, heart breaks, cheating, humiliations, pain and pleasures , life is a platter of all these.
Blessed are those who don't have to go through painful things. But even more blessed are those who come out winners after facing these with humility and emerge as better beings..
Thanks for this very touching write.. Keep up the good work...:-):-):-)


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the excellent review! I agree, we do learn from our mistakes and strive to be better t.. read more
Bala Gorthi

1 Year Ago

Thank you. It really is a pleasure reading your writes..
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Well, I should be the one saying thank you for you taking out the time to read them, but welcome .. read more

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