Gone

Gone

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

You ask me why I left 
Don't worry, this ain't your test 
I left coz its the right thing now 
You will thank me one day 
Somehow 
No, this wasn't for me, 
But for your gain 
I won't bother you ever again 
Okay, I know it was painful as hell 
But that is how doom fell 
I never said I'll always be there 
Why did you, so much, care? 
Know that you were loved 
But never were you my beloved 
I know its harsh 
The reality of it 
But its better now than 
Bit by bit



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Very nicely written.. I do understand sometimes decisions are difficult but what i ve experienced is sometimes we end up taking wrong decisions what we thought were right.. Anyways here is something i wrote after seeing yours
Why did you leave?
You were supposed to be there
You thought its the right thing
But didn't think how wud i feel
For me to be left here
Sulking down in ur memories
Here i am
Left with these tears in my eyes
And some dried on my cheeks
I know i am weak
You did too
Yet you chose to leave
And now here we stand looking at the empty paths
Ahead of us
We did lose each other
But also the trust
We lost
Us
You thought its the right thing
Not me……
Just sharing my thoughts.. Cheers


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the review. I guess we should look at the other side of the picture too. Why don't you.. read more
Gradient 47

1 Year Ago

Thank you.. Will do... For now i just want my first post to be a happy one..
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ohkay cool 👍



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Says it as it is, when someone faces up to the reality of a relationship... How true: 'Better now, than bit by bit'.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes indeed some decisions are better now than later. Thank you for reviewing ☺
Very nicely written.. I do understand sometimes decisions are difficult but what i ve experienced is sometimes we end up taking wrong decisions what we thought were right.. Anyways here is something i wrote after seeing yours
Why did you leave?
You were supposed to be there
You thought its the right thing
But didn't think how wud i feel
For me to be left here
Sulking down in ur memories
Here i am
Left with these tears in my eyes
And some dried on my cheeks
I know i am weak
You did too
Yet you chose to leave
And now here we stand looking at the empty paths
Ahead of us
We did lose each other
But also the trust
We lost
Us
You thought its the right thing
Not me……
Just sharing my thoughts.. Cheers


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for the review. I guess we should look at the other side of the picture too. Why don't you.. read more
Gradient 47

1 Year Ago

Thank you.. Will do... For now i just want my first post to be a happy one..
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ohkay cool 👍
Wow strong stuff...............Well done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for reviewing! It means a lot ☺

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Added on November 4, 2016
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Dr. YumnaKay
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Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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