Irresistible You

Irresistible You

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

What is this urge 
Of wanting you 
More than I want? 

Is is because 
You are too irresistible 
Or because 
I am too vulnerable? 

What is this heat 
Flowing through me 
At the mention 
Of your name 
At the sound 
Of your voice? 

What is this irony 
Of life? 
That when 
I need you the most 
You aren't here 
But away 
On a far distant way 

Oh what wouldn't I give 
To see that smile 
For which I could run miles 

Oh what wouldn't I give 
To feel that warmth 
Wrapped in your arms 

That moment 
Will come soon 
I believe 
When no one 
Could separate 
YOU and ME 



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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loved the overall feel of it..

these lines..

Oh what wouldn't I give
To see that smile
For which I could run miles

Oh what wouldn't I give
To feel that warmth
Wrapped in your arms

i tell them often to the love of my life :) so resonates a lot with me..
thanks for sharing the wonderful creation

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for liking! I'm glad it resonates with you. Isn't this what we all want? To be with our lo.. read more



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Well, it looks like youre very involved with this person

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Oh lol this was fiction back then ;)
Very nicely penned...I thought of the saying 'absence makes the heart grow fonder' in this case that rings true. Warm, loving, contented. Lovely piece. R xo

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes you are right! And thank you for the kind review. I really appreciate it ☺
You write very well for a dentist. :) There is a warmth to this and a feeling of longing and anticipation. Good write, YK

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you Ted ☺ I think its all about balancing between the dentistry thing and the writing stuff .. read more
loved the overall feel of it..

these lines..

Oh what wouldn't I give
To see that smile
For which I could run miles

Oh what wouldn't I give
To feel that warmth
Wrapped in your arms

i tell them often to the love of my life :) so resonates a lot with me..
thanks for sharing the wonderful creation

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for liking! I'm glad it resonates with you. Isn't this what we all want? To be with our lo.. read more
I think you captured the feeling perfectly with the irony of life verse...when you need them the most, they are nowhere to be seen. I've heard that song before, way too many times.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for liking and reviewing! And also for the insight ☺
Lorry.

1 Year Ago

You're welcome :)
Pleasing... dreams of a loved one - a case of 'absence lends enchantment to the view', I think


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Oops thank you for pointing out the error. Also for reviewing. I'm glad you liked it ☺
Jibey

1 Year Ago

You've still got an irresistable in the 2nd verse... needs changing to irresistible :-)
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ahh silly me thanks again ☺

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