For Life

For Life

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

At last 

I see you 
After waiting 
For an unwholesome amount of time 

At last 

I can feel you 
After anticipating 
This heavenly feeling 

At last 

I got the joys 
Of having you 
Oh, this bittersweet love 
Could take us anywhere 

Atlast 

I can say 
You are 
My final possession 
My one and only 
True love 
FOR LIFE 



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Gentle and worthwhile words dear Poet.
"I can say
You are
My final possession
My one and only
True love
FOR LIFE"
The above lines. Last wish for the all of us. Thank you for sharing the amazing words and poetry.
Coyote


Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Thank you for generous appreciation of my words, Coyote. Truly humbled..
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

You are welcome my dear friend.



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Gentle and worthwhile words dear Poet.
"I can say
You are
My final possession
My one and only
True love
FOR LIFE"
The above lines. Last wish for the all of us. Thank you for sharing the amazing words and poetry.
Coyote


Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Thank you for generous appreciation of my words, Coyote. Truly humbled..
Coyote Poetry

7 Months Ago

You are welcome my dear friend.
I really liked the format of this one, the repeating of "at last" had a lasting effect on the reader! Nicely done Yumna!

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Thank you, Kesha! Glad you liked this one :))
Kesha

7 Months Ago

You're welcome 😁
Who is this mysterious person? In the last 20 poems, it seems dispair was at the door, but now in these new chapters, there is someone who is lighting your life, I wonder, how beautiufl could it of been?

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

hahah yeah good question.. who could it be lol
this was again fiction at the time ;P
The repetition of 'at last' ties the message of the piece together very well by adding emphasis to the finality of finding true love. Nicely done!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for liking and reviewing ☺
I liked the neat construction of the poem and the simple repetition. Not sure why the love is 'bittersweet' when the words seem to be all about thing but sweetness.

One true love for life! Quite a challenge these days! May it be so.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for liking.
That word was added because true love is a challenge as you pointed ou.. read more

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