Come Back

Come Back

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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My version of the song "why not me" by "Enrique Iglesias"

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I was up tonight 
Thinking of the days 
That we had together 
Remembering the memories 
Is all that is left 
You told me you had to 
Leave me for good 
What good has it done 
Except breaking us up 
Why oh why tell me why not you 
You were the one that had to be 
And you were the one that I need 


You said that you'll be 
Back by the morrow 
But don't you just know that 
Tomorrow never comes 
I would be waiting here 
Right where you left 
Baby, just come back 
I'll pretend you never left 
Why oh why tell me why you left 
Why oh why did you have to go 



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Enrique Iglesias you say? I am very impressed

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Oh that's nice! Finally you got impressed haha :p
thank you, Sire :))
I am not familiar with the song you are refering to, although i am well aware of Enrique Iglesias.

Your write stands on its own feet, regardless of it being a rehash of a past song lyric.

Well captured emotions, nicely expressed.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad to know my writing meant something to you! Thank you for liking and revi.. read more
You capture the pop song genre well.. and manage to get some genuine feeling into it somehow.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you! This means a lot to me ☺ thanks for reviewing ☺

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