Does It Make A Difference?

Does It Make A Difference?

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

Nothing can stop me from being happy 
I will sing along and try to be 
The usual me 
All these talks that if a person isn't in your life 
Makes you crappy, feeling dead or emotionless 
Are just that.. Just talks.. 
You know you are fine 
One person does not make such a difference 
There are people who would love to see you smile 
Then why care for the one person who isn't there 
To see you shed the silent tears?



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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I enjoyed reading this between courses in a restaurant! What you write is so true. Being 'unattached' has many advantages. Although I am 'attached' I also value time on my own. I love too to form other relationships that add fulness to life and avoid the sense of being too confined. Life is about making the best of whatever our situation is. No need for silent tears. You are loved!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Rightly said.. Some people do have to learn the hard way not to be too clingy.. Thank you for the ni.. read more



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I believe you too have been reaching a break out... I wish to dive deeper and explore

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

I would like to see you try ;)
this was a long time ago btw...
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A love lost, yet still held on to, as I read into it. And the emotional and intellectual roller coaster which takes place inside, as if you are "telling" yourself it's alright, was nicely captured.

Not much to say but this touched my heart: with grief.

The last two lines sent it home for me, emotionally. Although the precursors were too part of that build up, making those last two lines so striking, in my eyes.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Well.. How nicely you summarize what was meant to be told.. I think we are the best person to tell o.. read more
Dats highly energising n thoughtful thing evr read on d subject!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you Tooba! I'm glad you liked it! Thank you for reviewing :)
It is so true my friend. We spend so much time and emotion into the one who is no longer there, when the ones trying to help, or the ones who admire from afar are the ones who deserve our attentions more....yet no one has found a cure for stopping the thoughts of them invading our every thought.


Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lorry.

1 Year Ago

You're very welcome @_
Lorry.

1 Year Ago

Duh...@ was meant to be a :)
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Haha 😂...
Being alone does not translate to being lonely. They are vastly different. We are lonely when someone special is not around, but we can be alone in ourselves and be fulfilled. Good write, YK

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

A good difference you pointed out. Most of us don't usually spot the difference. Thank you for the n.. read more
This resonates very deeply with me. Going through a breakup, this is exactly what i needed. It reminds me of all those who love me and that i'm not alone!

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes indeed! We never are alone.. Thanks for reviewing ☺
Strength resides within these words. Reassurance.
This write is fortifying. Well done, YumnaKay.

Phoenix

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for liking and reviewing, Pheonix ☺
PhoenixDown

1 Year Ago

You're most welcome.
Pheo
It is good to think positive.
You are so right. There are people who live to see your smile and happiness. They are the ones who truly matter.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I agree! Thank you for the nice review ☺
I think a lot of people go after love for the wrong reasons.
They think finding someone to love them, will make them happy...whole...complete.
The problem is, you are never happy, whole, or complete, with someone else. If you go into a relationship expecting that...you are headed for a painful fall. We have to be happy with ourselves first...whole and complete as a human...then we offer that to someone who gives us all of themselves...the whole person. If we cannot be happy in our own skin...they what makes us think someone else can fix that long term? I like the way you wrote this...perfectly.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I totally agree with you! Thank you for the nice review. I'm glad you liked it ☺
Yes, be yourself and be proud !

A introspective, heart searching, poetic contemplation

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you Tom for your kind words☺

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