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Manipulator

Manipulator

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Just playing around :p

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Look in my eyes. 
Yes.. slow and deep. 
Tell me, what do you see? 
Oh... you realized, 
yes, you are being hypnotized. 
Search me... I'm a Manipulator, 
I'll lead you 
to the place 
where you shouldn't be 
and you'll do things 
which will make you 
look like a fool... 
again and again. 
Because 
I'm a 
manipulator, 
the likes of which 
you have never seen... 




© 2018 Dr. YumnaKay



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Aha! I have been looking for this one ever since you showed me it- now... To find the othe one....

Any ways I suck at reviewing for real. Hmm. I like this.
It makes you seem like a Disney villain who is smug with power haha-
This was like you holding up a mirror so I could see my self in this poem... Nice work!
That is me trying on a review... (I have found something to add to my list of enemies; reviewing)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Month Ago

I don't think you're bad at reviewing, Sarah :) but interesting that you see yourself in this poem. .. read more



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A manipulator. Who bamboozles you with style and flare and class. Nicely expressed.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Month Ago

Aye, sometimes even harder to believe one was manipulated. We like thinking we're our own masters. ... read more
Aha! I have been looking for this one ever since you showed me it- now... To find the othe one....

Any ways I suck at reviewing for real. Hmm. I like this.
It makes you seem like a Disney villain who is smug with power haha-
This was like you holding up a mirror so I could see my self in this poem... Nice work!
That is me trying on a review... (I have found something to add to my list of enemies; reviewing)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Month Ago

I don't think you're bad at reviewing, Sarah :) but interesting that you see yourself in this poem. .. read more
So dark, but fortunately an honest admission by the narrator. Reminds me of Agatha Christie's 'Murder of Roger Ackroyd' and 'Endless Night' where the perp acts as the narrator.

Very well laid out, Yumna.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Month Ago

And very few who'll admit openly to being one ;)
Thank you so much for appreciating this old.. read more
θεά 

1 Month Ago

I think a few fools would gloat. But I don't think they'd be the ones laughing. ;)
Oh my, manipulation at its finest, a hypnotist I see...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

glad you figured that out ;)
I thought maybe you were talking about a donut. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

And I'll be sure to be out of range of your 'eye'😉
Palewriter

1 Year Ago

Not a chance, I'm the all seeing eye.
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Hah we'll see 😛
Ha, I found this entertaining and pretty funny in a weird way. For just playing around, it is pretty good.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Haha thank you! Glad you found it entertaining! I guess you have never been manipulated before, mayb.. read more
Lovecraft

1 Year Ago

Oh, I have. :P
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Oh that must have been bad.. Sorry😛
Haha good hypnotic write ...keepitup

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you for being hypnotized 😂
I'm glad you liked it ☺
Uday Bhasuthker

1 Year Ago

My pleasure...
Amazing! This presents either a magician or superpowers or simply a person manupulating someone in love. It so happens many times that you are with a wrong person and get enchanted with their charms and later repent for your mistake. In future you sometime laugh over your foolish act as well.

Well written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you! Yeah it does feel like that. But I think its good to be the manipulator 😉 thank you fo.. read more
tanmay7551

1 Year Ago

Haha! Oh yes, one has to choice to be on the either side.
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Exactly 😂
Yumna, you old spell binder you, look into my hazel eyes, I'm not that easy to hypnotize, but take me to places I shouldn't be. Mesmerizing poem. Good write

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Haha seems as if you are a good manipulator yourself 😉
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it, .. read more
Many of us are susceptible to the manipulation of others and can often find ourselves in any number of places we should not be. Well written and thought provoking.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes indeed.. The main thing is to decide whether we want to be manipulated or to "be" the manipulato.. read more

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