Doubts

Doubts

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

I have been too aggressive 
Too angry for my own good 
Never believing in your truths 
Always considering them lies 
Or just bending them into what I believe is true 
You say you haven't been a good friend 
But in actual I haven't been 
At least you don't doubt me 
While me? 
I do 
Every single, ruddy moment of my life 
Spent doubting you 
Your intentions 
Your friendship 
Always believing 
That this will end 
When either you 
Or me 
Lose interest 
Maybe I'm wrong 
But then 
When have I ever been right 
Except for the moment 
When I chose 
You?



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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"Always considering them lies
Or just bending them into what I believe is true"

Doubts are rooted in us- which makes us ponder and look more into things. However we sometimes, this lust to relinquish the doubts makes us blind to things before us.
Curiosity wounds us-sometimes. That's what I believe.
Really liked your poem. Simple but meaningful. The ending was really beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Yes.. Its the doubts which does the job of separating loved ones....
I'm glad you liked it. T.. read more


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And yet another mysterious figure in your life... Im still searching

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

well this was for a friend... you don't have to search that much lol
Yumna... you truly have a great talent with your writing pieces. I really do enjoy them.

This piece just shows personal experience. And i love how you write with your heart. Lovely, absolutely lovely!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Jay! But mostly my writings are wordplays and nothing to do with personal experiences😂.. read more
JayDee

11 Months Ago

Pleasure. Really?? wow that;s even better. A brilliant mind at that! Hahaha
nevertheless, yo.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

haha! As are yours :)
Doubts comes from mind
But god has given us the precious lively organ its heart ... Sometimes heartfelt meanwhile mind distracts heart .. it will b very confusing so its better to calm down n listen feelings n heart first than reacting the nagative possession

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

I agree... Thank you for the kind words ☺
Uday Bhasuthker

11 Months Ago

My pleasure..
The voice behind this piece is powerful, the raw emotion hits home and it's painfully human. Uncertainty and fears are an ember that can quickly spread into a wildfire, if you let them. Thank you for sharing this excellent write.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Yes indeed! Thank you for liking and reviewing ☺
Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)

11 Months Ago

You're welcome!
The highs and lows of being with someone special. Thanks for the read.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you for liking and reviewing! Much appreciated ☺
Doubts only affect the doubter. Like a poison spread through the mind into the heart it will kill a relationship quickly. Doubt and jealousy, the two enemies of love. Good write, YK

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

I quite agree with you.. Thank you for liking and reviewing! ☺
contemplation more often than not results in some sort of doubt. The heart is often wiser than the mind- listen to your heart...

Odd, you may say, coming from someone going by a name such as mine :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Haha yes certainly 😉
But you are right.. Often the heart already decides on something whi.. read more
Wondering Mind

11 Months Ago

you're welcome :)
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yes,sometime doubts leave our life only with a feelings of guilt and emptiness..but it is also true that sometime past worst betrayal makes us cautious and sometime over protective..and the last line is very sweet..beautiful :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Yes indeed I agree.. Thank you so much for liking and reviewing !:)
The mind is a really unstable place to be, but only sometimes. Specifically in scenarios like you describe here very clearly, vividly, and in fine rawness.

What's interesting is trying to make it back from this kind of mentality. How does one do it?

Again, you capture universal scenarios very well, friend. Always a pleasure reading. :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

It is difficult indeed! To practice not to feel the negativity and go for a positive approach.. The .. read more
Asante

11 Months Ago

Agreed with what you said on all fronts!
My pleasure. :)
"Always considering them lies
Or just bending them into what I believe is true"

Doubts are rooted in us- which makes us ponder and look more into things. However we sometimes, this lust to relinquish the doubts makes us blind to things before us.
Curiosity wounds us-sometimes. That's what I believe.
Really liked your poem. Simple but meaningful. The ending was really beautiful. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 11 Months Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Yes.. Its the doubts which does the job of separating loved ones....
I'm glad you liked it. T.. read more

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