You Make My Day

You Make My Day

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

I depend on you too much 
For my sanity 
My being active 
Even though I don't feel like it at times 
Even though I know you aren't 
The last resort 
Still I consume you whole 
And in larger amounts everyday 
Making you my addiction 
An everyday ritual 
That I perform 
To make myself keep alive 
To carry on this hectic schedule of life 
For you make my lousy day 
Seem easy to take on 
With all its eccentricities 
Coz you are the one 
Whose loyalty will never waver 
And I can always rely upon you 
To make me feel good 
After I've had you 
My dear, hot "cup of coffee" 




© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



Author's Note

Dr. YumnaKay
Changes made for which Jibey should be given credit...☺

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Heartfelt piece... Reading this took me to my past.. in the process of forgeting we may experiment many ways to divert our mindz in some activity but only till for some extent or for some months... As usual at the end always i fail to let go From my heart... Thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you for this insight.. I'm glad you could relate.. Thank you for liking :)
Uday Bhasuthker

11 Months Ago

My pleasure yumna



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Never thought it would be a cup of coffee. ha ha.
Wonderfully Written! :)

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

2 Months Ago

Thank you. Glad you like it 😊
NerdyBeauty

2 Months Ago

You're Welcome, Yumna. :P
Ah, it seems he is getting closer and closer

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

oh lol it isn't a 'he', it's coffee :p
Heartfelt piece... Reading this took me to my past.. in the process of forgeting we may experiment many ways to divert our mindz in some activity but only till for some extent or for some months... As usual at the end always i fail to let go From my heart... Thank you for sharing

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you for this insight.. I'm glad you could relate.. Thank you for liking :)
Uday Bhasuthker

11 Months Ago

My pleasure yumna
Love this. A nice surprise at the end, giving the bean that keeps on giving the credit it deserves, while leading our thoughts into another direction :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Hah well the surprise was intended 😂
Thank you for liking and reviewing this. Really appr.. read more
haha nicely written.... you made the readers to react at the last part..... and say aww =)

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

12 Months Ago

Yeah one may think its a bit of cliché, right 😂
Thank you for liking and reviewing! Real.. read more
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No better way to start the day, coffee and silence...bliss. Really liked this

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

12 Months Ago

I agree! Thank you for liking ☺
I enjoyed the start, you lead on the reader, making it seem like a person you depend on then change at the end, specially stating that it's coffee.

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

12 Months Ago

I have started to feel that things are better companions than people. That's what I wrote.. Thank yo.. read more
Wow! you have chosen a unique subject and quite true. On days where I work sometimes through night, cup of coffee is my best friend.

Cheers over cup of coffee!

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

12 Months Ago

Thank you for liking and reviewing! Much appreciated☺
I enjoyed this a lot.. so often it is the case that someone makes all the difference to our day and you express this so nicely.

But I found the last two lines jarred... the image seemed too banal.. . Ad 'coffee cup'? Maybe 'cup of coffee',,, but an empty coffee cup wouldn't do much for me!

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 12 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

12 Months Ago

This wasn't written in scenario for a person.. Sometimes its a trivial thing that makes our day.. Bu.. read more

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