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Wondering Why

Wondering Why

A Chapter by Closed

Isn’t it odd 
That I was there for you 
Whenever you needed me 
That I was there to heal you 
Whenever you needed me 
And then 
The times changed 
I was the one in need 
Of you 
I was waiting for your touch 
But that moment 
Never arrived 
You found someone new 
Someone better than me 
Or maybe I was never better 
For you 
And that you were putting up 
Until you found some other 
To make a fool 
Like you made me 
So here I am 
Pondering over what I did 
To deserve this 
Or maybe you are wondering the same thing 
That I wasn’t worth your while 
But then 
What is your worth? 
You will know 
When you’ll have 
Your heart 
Trodden upon 
Like you did 
With mine.....



© 2017 Closed



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Greatly captures the fallout of a betrayed love and the inner reflection that follows, some of these lines conjured up how I once felt. It's one thing to have loved and lost, it's another to have been used and made to feel like nothing. Thank you for sharing this, it's very connectable.

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Yes exactly! I'm glad you could connect to this.. Thank you for your kind words, Jack ☺



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We are all still wondering I believe

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I believe that too.
Greatly captures the fallout of a betrayed love and the inner reflection that follows, some of these lines conjured up how I once felt. It's one thing to have loved and lost, it's another to have been used and made to feel like nothing. Thank you for sharing this, it's very connectable.

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Yes exactly! I'm glad you could connect to this.. Thank you for your kind words, Jack ☺
Betrayed in love, sould speaks from heart. These are not cries or curse, but these words are spoken out of authority to demand justice.

It is very difficult to digest such instances. Very well written YumnaKay!

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1 Year Ago

I agree! Thank you so much for liking and reviewing :)
"Some people come in your life as blessings, others come in your life as lessons"

A quote I found last year when I first started, and I have definitely felt this way several times, so I appreciate the truthfulness and reality behind the piece. As 'Cobblestone Traveler' said, "us deep thinkers and over-feelers"... it is difficult to find someone with the same kind of passion.
Amazing work! Keep it up!

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Thankyou! I agree.. I'm glad you liked it :)
It always leaves us wondering why- some times it could be a blessing in disguise.

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1 Year Ago

Definitely! Life teaches us lessons from which we should learn and recognize people.. Thank you for .. read more
Really good!! Keep writing!! The ending was so true that you will know how it is when someone does that to you...

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Yeah sometimes what shouldn't come out of the heart does come out..it was one of those things.. Than.. read more
Most excellent! It hits home with me; I feel this so much. Spicy, bitter, fresh. We give so much of ourselves, us deep thinkers and over-feelers, and when we need rejuvenation it's difficult to find someone with the same passion and depth. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

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Yes I agree.. Maybe one should exercise caution over whom to give our all.. Thank you for liking and.. read more
totally relatable, good work

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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it :)

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