Beautiful Mistake

Beautiful Mistake

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Rewritten.

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Can mistakes be beautiful? 
I used to think this some time ago.
 
Then I met you, and you were 
my first ever mistake, in a beautiful sense...
 
I tried hard not to collide with you,
yet I fell head over heels ~ for you.
 
Walking step by step 
along your side.
 
Accidentally 
touching - your fingers.
 
Stepping 
over - your shoes.
 
Trying 
to grab - your hand.
 
Pretending 
- to fall.
 
All these mistakes... 
but in a beautiful sense.
 
The only mistake 
I never regret is to be ~ with you. 
 
Because you are, 
my one and only ~ Beautiful mistake ...



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love the oxymoron...

and reminds me of sheryl crow...
"you're my favorite mistake"---

or Cam's "you're my mistake to make all night"

others might warn us, but even when they don't work out...mistakes are in our memory bank and most without regret.

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Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Yes.. and most of us don't even hesitate to make these mistakes again and again



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Now you are asking my kinds of questoins

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Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

I can be philosophical at times too ;)
This reminds me of the song title Beautiful Disaster. I believe beauty is in imperfections. A person who is perfectly beautiful has no mysteries left to explore.

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Posted 8 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

8 Months Ago

I'll have to listen to that song.. And I agree, some imperfections are what make it more beautiful.<.. read more
If you make a balls up of someone's teeth it won't be beautiful but some mistakes can be. Your little scenarios were full of fun and innocence. They're lovely.
This is pure romance.
Well done.
:))

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Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Hah no! I have a heart still but its so cold out there it forgot to beat lol 😂😛
And I'.. read more
Tony Jordan

10 Months Ago

Your hearts in suspended animation?
Why not open it with a KEY Yumnakay
;p
Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Haha I think I lost it 😛
Those are some nice words and feelings brought outside. Its beautiful ❤️👍

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Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you for the kind words! It means alot! Thankyou for liking ☺
Lovely and sentimental! This may not happen often but when it happens it turns out that contradiction refuses to give up. Love conquers such odds.

Liked it!

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Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

I agree! One can only dream.. Thank you for liking and reviewing ☺
Sometimes we need these mistakes in our lives to remember and learn along the path we find ahead. They never make sense, until we find ourselves with the choice of another possible future mistake....or would the mistake be walking away and never finding out?
We all have them, yet can only find out they are a mistake with taking that chance. Nicely captured.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Mistakes are what teaches us the lessons that no one else can teach us.. Thankyou for the nice revie.. read more
love the oxymoron...

and reminds me of sheryl crow...
"you're my favorite mistake"---

or Cam's "you're my mistake to make all night"

others might warn us, but even when they don't work out...mistakes are in our memory bank and most without regret.

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Yes.. and most of us don't even hesitate to make these mistakes again and again
Everyrhing happens for a reason, to build us up. Grea work here no doubt.

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Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Yes I agree.. Thank you for liking and reviewing ☺
I like the sentiment of this piece.. The image painted of the girl trying to gain the heart and attentions of the boy she loves, to keep the relationship going was simply detailed, but clearly. Nice work..
..Misty

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Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you I'm glad to know that you understood the sentiments involved☺
Hah well, my best f.. read more
M. L. F.

11 Months Ago

Very cool..
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Yeahhh ☺☺☺
I do agree with you. Best mistake is the one whom we love the most, but it could also turn to be the worst mistake, if we let that person go away from our life. Overall, I really love your work :)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Yes indeed! Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it, Kevin ☺

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