Beautiful Mistake

Rewritten.

Can mistakes be beautiful? 

I used to think this some time ago.

 

Then I met you, and you were 

my first ever mistake, in a beautiful sense...

 

I tried hard not to collide with you,

yet I fell head over heels ~ for you.

 

Walking step by step 

along your side.

 

Accidentally 

touching - your fingers.

 

Stepping 

over - your shoes.

 

Trying 

to grab - your hand.

 

Pretending 

- to fall.

 

All these mistakes... 

but in a beautiful sense.

 

The only mistake 

I never regret is to be ~ with you. 

 

Because you are, 

my one and only ~ Beautiful mistake ...

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

love the oxymoron...

and reminds me of sheryl crow...
"you're my favorite mistake"---

or Cam's "you're my mistake to make all night"

others might warn us, but even when they don't work out...mistakes are in our memory bank and most without regret.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yes.. and most of us don't even hesitate to make these mistakes again and again

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

Now you are asking my kinds of questoins

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I can be philosophical at times too ;)

[Michael G. Smith]

This reminds me of the song title Beautiful Disaster. I believe beauty is in imperfections. A person who is perfectly beautiful has no mysteries left to explore.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I'll have to listen to that song.. And I agree, some imperfections are what make it more beautiful.
Thank you for sharing your thoughts here as well 😊

[Tony Jordan]

If you make a balls up of someone's teeth it won't be beautiful but some mistakes can be. Your little scenarios were full of fun and innocence. They're lovely.
This is pure romance.
Well done.
:))

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yeah before I went crazy, I used to right pure (read: yuck) romances like these 😂😂😂
Thank you for liking the innocence in this one Tony (read: Tiny) 😛☺

[Tony Jordan]

Oi leave Tiny out of this. So you had a heart once Key.
You're just a big softy. Hah! You've been rumbled.
; p

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hah no! I have a heart still but its so cold out there it forgot to beat lol 😂😛
And I'll stop calling you Tiny when you stop calling me Key 😂😂😂
So the ball is in your court TJ 😉

[Tony Jordan]

Your hearts in suspended animation?
Why not open it with a KEY Yumnakay
;p

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Haha I think I lost it 😛

[FArhaan FAzal]

Those are some nice words and feelings brought outside. Its beautiful ❤️👍

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you for the kind words! It means alot! Thankyou for liking ☺

[tanmay7551]

Lovely and sentimental! This may not happen often but when it happens it turns out that contradiction refuses to give up. Love conquers such odds.

Liked it!

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I agree! One can only dream.. Thank you for liking and reviewing ☺

[Lorry]

Sometimes we need these mistakes in our lives to remember and learn along the path we find ahead. They never make sense, until we find ourselves with the choice of another possible future mistake....or would the mistake be walking away and never finding out?
We all have them, yet can only find out they are a mistake with taking that chance. Nicely captured.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Mistakes are what teaches us the lessons that no one else can teach us.. Thankyou for the nice review ☺

[Nickdykstra]

Everyrhing happens for a reason, to build us up. Grea work here no doubt.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yes I agree.. Thank you for liking and reviewing ☺

[M. L. F.]

I like the sentiment of this piece.. The image painted of the girl trying to gain the heart and attentions of the boy she loves, to keep the relationship going was simply detailed, but clearly. Nice work..
..Misty

[M. L. F.]

I'm INFJ, btw... And I know an INTJ... unicorn party. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Thank you I'm glad to know that you understood the sentiments involved☺
Hah well, my best friend is an INFJ so I know a lot about that particular type 😂

[M. L. F.]

Very cool..

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yeahhh ☺☺☺

[Kevin Gerardo]

I do agree with you. Best mistake is the one whom we love the most, but it could also turn to be the worst mistake, if we let that person go away from our life. Overall, I really love your work :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Yes indeed! Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you liked it, Kevin ☺