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Beautiful Mistake

Beautiful Mistake

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
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Rewritten.

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Can mistakes be beautiful? 
I used to think this some time ago.
 
Then I met you, and you were 
my first ever mistake, in a beautiful sense...
 
I tried hard not to collide with you,
yet I fell head over heels ~ for you.
 
Walking step by step 
along your side.
 
Accidentally 
touching - your fingers.
 
Stepping 
over - your shoes.
 
Trying 
to grab - your hand.
 
Pretending 
- to fall.
 
All these mistakes... 
but in a beautiful sense.
 
The only mistake 
I never regret is to be ~ with you. 
 
Because you are, 
my one and only ~ Beautiful mistake ...



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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love the oxymoron...

and reminds me of sheryl crow...
"you're my favorite mistake"---

or Cam's "you're my mistake to make all night"

others might warn us, but even when they don't work out...mistakes are in our memory bank and most without regret.

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Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Yes.. and most of us don't even hesitate to make these mistakes again and again



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Awesomely written Yumna :)
All of us ...at some point of time commit that mistake...
Some regret it, some accept it, some ignore it and some just love this mistake

Again thanks for writing this beautiful poem :)

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Yes, I agree! Thank you Ashish, for the nice review! I'm glad you liked it☺
How was it a mistake? Perhaps in the sense that you didn't look for this person - it was a chance encounter rather than planned... But not a mistake, surely!

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Thank you for the kind advice ☺
YanZeros

10 Months Ago

Ops! sorry Yumna
I gave reviews on reply!
You're welcome, Good day!
Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

No problem :p
You too :)

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Dr. YumnaKay
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Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



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