So confused

So confused

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

So confused
So confused
making up my mind on
getting excused
from the formalities of conversing
with people I didn't choose

So confused
So confused
Have I been misused or abused
I'm bemused

So confused 
So confused
Can I ask for help?
No, I can't 
At my state of mind
They'll only be amused

So confused
So confused
Go away
I'm not in the mood....



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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Simply loving it. I much like the repetition "so Confused, So Confused. Some time our mind are in such state. ans we say what to do. where to go. But in this situation we are not able to do anything except to have patience. well written. Keep it up.

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Szhzia

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Yes but even patience loses patience with us in those situations.. Thank you for liknig and reviewin.. read more
SZHZIA

11 Months Ago

You are welcome. I know but once can manage through practicing meditation. I experienced it I contro.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

You are probably right. Will try to :)



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Well... It looks like someone got on your bad side that day

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

Hahah yeah it could be that. I really don't remember 😛
Simply loving it. I much like the repetition "so Confused, So Confused. Some time our mind are in such state. ans we say what to do. where to go. But in this situation we are not able to do anything except to have patience. well written. Keep it up.

Best
Szhzia

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Yes but even patience loses patience with us in those situations.. Thank you for liknig and reviewin.. read more
SZHZIA

11 Months Ago

You are welcome. I know but once can manage through practicing meditation. I experienced it I contro.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

You are probably right. Will try to :)
The need for solitude--time to think things through or allow emotions to settle down--is, of course, quite human.
The repetition in this piece increases its impact; makes for a more effective poem.
Although I'm now a bit confused, myself, I did thoroughly enjoy the read, Kay.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you for liking! Really appreciate your kind words :)
The rhyming scheme is stunning. It sounds nice when you read it out loud. I can feel exactly what's written in this piece - occupying a awkward social position when one has to do all the calculations be appealing to the others, and is too afraid to ask for help because when you show the weakness, the others will not help but trample you more. At this state withdrawing from the crowd seems to be the only solution. This is a great emotional piece!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

But even that solution is not approachable often.. Thank you for your insight here.. I'm glad you li.. read more
I think to want to ask for help is a human trait but it is often superseded by the need to 'look' like we don't need help. Asking for help has implications - its why men don't ask for directions - it feels like a weakness that must be hidden.
We all need help during our lifetime. Even the Beatles ;p

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

I agree! It does feel vulnerable.. Thank you for liking and reviewing this piece.. I appreciate it :.. read more
Tony Jordan

11 Months Ago

Your welcome :)
Impressive stanzas here:

"So confused
So confused
making up my mind on
getting excused
from the formalities of conversing
with people I didn't choose"

Damn Daniel.... you can see here in the stanzas above how you really read this part aloud and HEARD the rhythm... of your breaks and syllables. Keep doing THAT in all your work, and it will set fire! Great emotions expressed as well! ;)



Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Misty for appreciating the rhythm here! I guess this was one of those days when I could a.. read more
M. L. F.

11 Months Ago

Anytime... :) Great write...
I've been there. I liked the way you expressed it...

"So confused
So confused
Can I ask for help?
No, I can't
At my state of mind
They'll only be amused"

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

I think everyone does go through that at sometime of life..when you know that asking for help won't .. read more
Cyprian Van Dyke

11 Months Ago

You're most welcome. Yes, you're so right. :)
So confused
So confused
How to tell you
This is fantastic
The words are insufficient that I have choosed :)

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Hahaha!! Thank you for the poetic review! I appreciate it ☺
Ashish

11 Months Ago

My pleasure :)

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