Always

Always

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay

'Do you see that oak tree, right over there?' She asked.
'Yes, I do.Why?' I replied.
'The way it stands all day..Do you get it?
All the while, providing shade and comfort to all those
who come to rest under it..
Never once thinking of its own benefit..
And what does it need? Watering daily for it to flourish
So that it can continue for what it's meant to do all along
But what happens, then?
It is shoved mercilessly away, cut and thrown for our benefits.'
I didn't know where this was leading to..
She continued:
'This is how I feel like,
I am here for everyone
My friends, my family and whoever else needs my help
Comforting them in their time of needs
Yet no one realizes that maybe I too need it when feeling low.'

And finally I understood, what she meant by giving the example of an oak tree
I looked her in the eyes and said:
'I am always there for you..'  



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



My Review

Would you like to review this Chapter?
Login | Register




Featured Review

A resounding message that's both true and wise, especially the conclusion. The comparison to the giving of a tree is a classic metaphor and you pen it effectively here. I could relate to this, I'm the person my friends often come to when they need to vent or are having a hard time, but I rarely get to myself. Sometimes the person that's there for everyone needs someone to be there for them. Thank you for sharing this excellent write.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you! Yes, I agree! Your appreciation means alot, Jack! ☺
Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)

11 Months Ago

You are welcome!



Reviews

Sometimes, when we are keen to give advice to others, we can give the impression, that we are invincible. Even your mighty oak would not have flourished without the help of its acorn.
An excellent metaphor,reflecting asobering message.


Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

3 Months Ago

That's a great insight. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Much appreciated (:
Trees though always providing fruit and air and shelter to other, are the strongest of all nature. If only we understood.

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

7 Months Ago

True.. If only we did.. And same goes with some humans as well..
Creative, beautiful and romantic

Posted 9 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

9 Months Ago

Hey thank you! I truly appreciate it :)
Beautiful message!
I feel there is always one person like that in our lives, who selflessly care for us. But sometimes their servitude is taken for granted, which is a shame and we all should care for the people who love us.
Great piece!
Kudos!

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Hmm well, if only we can find that person and realize their importance..but usually it's too late be.. read more
Jyoti_Ablaze

10 Months Ago

We all should look around us more keenly then.
Enjoyed reading. You are welcome.
Dr. YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

I agree!!☺
What a beautiful divine glimpse of wisdom, and kindness, and the world of loving and living to lift each other. It is wondrous when poetry lifts the reader, making him or her wish to be a better person.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it ☺
AH! Just captures the heart!
stunning!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Jay! This means a lot ☺
JayDee

11 Months Ago

You are most welcome!
A resounding message that's both true and wise, especially the conclusion. The comparison to the giving of a tree is a classic metaphor and you pen it effectively here. I could relate to this, I'm the person my friends often come to when they need to vent or are having a hard time, but I rarely get to myself. Sometimes the person that's there for everyone needs someone to be there for them. Thank you for sharing this excellent write.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you! Yes, I agree! Your appreciation means alot, Jack! ☺
Jack Necron (Aubrey Jack Peaslee)

11 Months Ago

You are welcome!
This is a very relatable idea, expressed in a very creative way. Good job using a parable to show instead of tell. In our US society around the holidays, many moms are probably feeling this way as they work so hard to prepare everything for everyone else, but neglect themselves. Everyone needs to hear the last line more often than they probably do!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

I think anywhere, whether it be my country, Pakistan or India,in short all around the world, moms ar.. read more
barleygirl

11 Months Ago

I very much agree with your final statement in your reply, especially. People want attention but for.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Well yes the world would be a better place if all of us realized this..
Only recently in my own community and farther afield are carers beginning to get the recognition they deserve (and 9 times out of 10 don't even want) but they are only human too.
This is a wonderful piece YumnaKay. My favourite of yours yet.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

I'm sure of this point though that we will get the recognition we deserve after we are no longer in .. read more
Tony Jordan

11 Months Ago

I hope so.
Welcome my friend. :)
Beautifully written my friend! I have no other words than, wow! I really love this poem!

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

11 Months Ago

Thank you, Gullia! Your appreciation means a lot :)

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

523 Views
18 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 3 Libraries
Added on December 10, 2016
Last Updated on August 17, 2017


Author

Dr. YumnaKay
Dr. YumnaKay

Karachi, Sindh, Pakistan



About
~ In search of a new me ~ more..

Writing
(in)sanity (in)sanity

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay


Tenterhooks Tenterhooks

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Broken Too Broken Too

A Poem by ReedWrite