Desires

Desires

A Chapter by Dr. YumnaKay
"

Becoming wild..

"
Burning desires 
creeping up my veins,

fluttering heart, 
no longer in chains ...

Oh, why so surprised?
No, I'm not on cocaine.

This is the real me, 
no longer with restrains.

Come f**k me, 
'cause I'm already fucked up ...

until my brain ~ drains.



© 2017 Dr. YumnaKay



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This is definitely a change from some of your other poetry; I was a little shocked at your use of the word "f**k" because I so rarely see it. I'm curious about the language you've used in a few parts. "Burning desire" paired with the "no I'm not on cocaine". If you would, why did you choose those specific words? This is a nice departure for you, though I do like your softer side too :)

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Well that departure from the normal was brought by the fact that I wanted to try my hand in every ge.. read more
Neville Pettitt

1 Year Ago

Shame but at least a taste of freedom is better than no taste at all.........N
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Hm well yes..😊



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That's quite a shift from what I've come to know of you..great though. Fierce and quite hot ; ) an awesome freeing voice and maybe even thought behind this. I really enjoyed this piece. Starz x

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Dr. YumnaKay

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To tell you the truth, I got inspired by you to write this... I'm glad you liked it! Thank you ☺
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What a lovely compliment
: ) that instantly lifted my morning. Thank you friend x
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I'm glad!☺
There is a sense of shaking off the dust and beginning to dance into the wildness of midnight flowing through your thoughts. May you never feel held back from being the real you, and more each day. :)

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Dr. YumnaKay

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Thank you, C! Though I shudder to think of the day when that happens, still thank you for the nice w.. read more
An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

Ah, well, perhaps becoming "YOU" will be a most wondrous, beautiful lifelong journey, dear poet, and.. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Probably yes.. Thanks again ☺
Nice. Sometimes we just have to let the beast out of its restraints and run wild and scream for a while. It's a good place to be, burning off all that energy and restraint into aggression and wildness of freedom barely dreamed of. When calmed, looking back at being unleashed, a smile will always pass your lips at the knowledge that you can be free again when you choose. Sometimes we just have to feel that heart beat wildly to feel alive :)

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I agree! The mind is when caged thinks of ways to set itself free and when it does..this is what com.. read more
Lorry

1 Year Ago

You're always welcome :)
This is definitely a change from some of your other poetry; I was a little shocked at your use of the word "f**k" because I so rarely see it. I'm curious about the language you've used in a few parts. "Burning desire" paired with the "no I'm not on cocaine". If you would, why did you choose those specific words? This is a nice departure for you, though I do like your softer side too :)

This review was written for a previous version of this writing

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Well that departure from the normal was brought by the fact that I wanted to try my hand in every ge.. read more
Neville Pettitt

1 Year Ago

Shame but at least a taste of freedom is better than no taste at all.........N
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Hm well yes..😊
Ohh this was hot! Short but yet so powerful. I love that you can write about different things and not just about sweet love. Something I need to learn how to do haha!

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Gullia, you can too! Just recognize your inner self and let the words flow... Btw I was in too much .. read more
I loved the wildness of this... the burning desire and the strength of the word 'f**k'... so expressive ... and so good to know that you can cast off all restraints... making you a wonderful lover

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thankyou, Jibey! It feels good to be wild once in awhile!😂
Thank you for liking and revie.. read more
Its December but it feels like hot Summer so passionate Yumna lovin' this poetry!

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Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Ahh well, I'm embarrassed that you read this :p
This was just me being a wildcat :D
Th.. read more
YanZeros

1 Year Ago

You are welcome :) some/most of my poetry are embarrassing too! Good thing we can hide ourselves in .. read more
Dr. YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Hahaha yeah whoever did is a saint indeed 😂

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