I'll Wait

I'll Wait

A Chapter by Dr YumnaKay

I try so hard to be interested in you
Sometimes I even fool myself
That I'm in love with you
But I know I'm not
'Cause one experience is more than enough 
For me to bear
I think it's hard and 'Tis my heart that I fear
Which has been drawn towards you
By more than once
But I won't let it make 
The same mistake again
And this time I'll wait until I'm sure 
That you are the right person for me

I try so hard to believe that you are real
Sometimes I believe it too
That you actually care
But I know you don't
'Cause I've seen you falling for her
If just for once
I know it's easy for you 
To fall in love again and again
Like you claim you feel that for me
But I won't make 
The same mistake I did before
And I WILL make sure
That you are the right person for me

I just don't know how....



© 2017 Dr YumnaKay



Author's Note

Dr YumnaKay
Please, to those of you who think this is my story : No, it isn't :p

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Gives good expression to the turmoil and uncertainty of online relationships in particular. We all learn best from experience... though it can be hard and hard to resist apparently sincere approaches. Best to bide your time and be cautious. (Being the Dutch uncle again lol)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Ahh well yeah I abs agree. But I go by the expression 'the heart wants what it wants' these days .. read more
Jibey

10 Months Ago

Something to be said for female intuition!
Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Probably 😉😛



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Gives good expression to the turmoil and uncertainty of online relationships in particular. We all learn best from experience... though it can be hard and hard to resist apparently sincere approaches. Best to bide your time and be cautious. (Being the Dutch uncle again lol)

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Ahh well yeah I abs agree. But I go by the expression 'the heart wants what it wants' these days .. read more
Jibey

10 Months Ago

Something to be said for female intuition!
Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

Probably 😉😛
To fall in love again and again, just means falling... when will you get up and stand?

Posted 10 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

10 Months Ago

I think there is no standing back from that after falling...
So touching, a softly spoken poem ...
It's excellent...

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Hey thank you! I'm glad you liked it ☺
A well-expressed message of wisdom about waiting. I think TIME is the main ingredient for a good foundation between friends or lovers. Too many people rush their way in. Your poem shows us this lesson, with a nice realistic dose of regret & uncertainty hiding between the lines, as impetus for struggling to learn & act on this idea.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I agree! Time is the main thing.. But most of us realize its importance after we no longer have it.... read more
Well done, Yk. Yes, we can fool ourselves into falling in love, but it never is returned. Good one.

Good luck on your exams.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, TK! This means a lot! ☺
I can feel the sadness in each word.. it was a nice poem.. I like this one :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it ☺
Fate

1 Year Ago

welcome :)
Heartfelt and full of sadness. I feel so bad for the subject, as I can relate, all too well. Wonderful job of conveying the rich feelings of doubt and wanting.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

I can relate too having seen people in that situation. I understand the feelings you may have felt w.. read more
Such a rich, extravagant tenderness in your words. There is a longing, a searching for truth and beauty and love in your soul's poetic confessions, so I appreciate your honest note as well. My poetry has somehow all become autobiography. :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Well thank you so much! It's a good thing to write what you feel..but sometimes it's better to try t.. read more
An owl on the moon

1 Year Ago

It is a wondrous miracle when a poet can step in someone else's shoes... yes!
Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Yes indeed! 😊
This sounded like somewhat confuse or at the moment of realization of a feeling felt above the surface. It is there the feeling is in the air its up to you to acknowledge or accept it. But faking a feeling just to be nice and please someone is not good for you or for the other person. Very well written poetry took me awhile to come up with the right words for a review. Good Job Yumna.

Posted 1 Year Ago


Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Well you don't know.. Some people are good at faking things ;)
But I agree with you.. It's ei.. read more
YanZeros

1 Year Ago

you're welcome a pleasure reading your poetry. :)
But it is the story of many including me Lol..

Actually your note had changed my words which I suppose to write...

Well done :)

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Lol haha I know... Still thank you for liking.. Can't say I'm glad you relate to this 'cause its kin.. read more
Ashish

1 Year Ago

I felt really emotional but then I read your note and it makes me instantly laugh..
Dr YumnaKay

1 Year Ago

Well that's the keypoint.. To spread smiles though feeling a little down☺

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